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mkomar24 · 05-16-2009, 04:48 PM

I had some footage from our last event in STL and I made a short video that cuts between three camera angles. There is no spots left out I just randomly selected different angles to be shown at different times so its the whole run. Im kind of new to the track thing so I would love any input on what a better line would be or where I could add speed angle whatever. Its an S13 with blacktop SR 13psi, exhaust intake, JIC coilovers, and 16 inch tires. Any input would be awesome!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urTOG...e=channel_page

n_my_coupe · 05-17-2009, 04:37 AM

keep it up man ....i cant say much i just started driving at adams kart track

jussjepbrox · 05-17-2009, 05:00 AM

YOUR KILLIN IT. good job get outside shots also

Felipe · 05-17-2009, 05:21 AM

how many runs did that take to make?

mkomar24 · 05-17-2009, 11:41 AM

Actually this video was three individual runs one with each camera mount. Two mounts outside, one inside. The runs were all the same line with little variation so I could just cut between the three angles to try and show the best shot of each turn. I dont know much about editing so mabe this wasnt the best way to show it but it does show each corner, transition, and the only part that overlaps is where it shows an outside manji view looking back and then the inside manji view right near the end. Other than that it should show the whole course from start to end. Right at the end of the last two turns you can hear me get off the throttle as the car just keeps sliding and losing speed. Any advice on how to keep in the throttle but not fly off the edge of the track?

Sexy_Ninja · 05-17-2009, 07:21 PM

omar. u da shit.

Team DET · 05-17-2009, 08:16 PM

i like good job

RMerritts · 05-18-2009, 09:09 AM

Think i saw this over at the STL forums, not bad man, keep practicin youll get better.

JDMslide180 · 05-18-2009, 09:14 PM

good shit bro... keep it up^^^

WagDatto · 05-19-2009, 12:46 PM

Needs more rev-limiter! Haha, just kidding, clean run! I'm definitely feeling it!

Best editing would be 3 views from ONE run, so when you cut to a different view, you can match it up so it's completely seamless as far as noise. It threw me off when you started the run and switched to outside view and the rev was way off.

haggard240 · 05-19-2009, 01:14 PM

you didn't spin out.. soo give it a

J ROK · 05-19-2009, 01:26 PM

How can we critique the best of 3 diff. runs? It would make sense to watch all 3 runs.

Good driving and nice track though.

s142jzkillav10 · 05-19-2009, 08:34 PM

Looks like some good runs too me. ++

mkomar24 · 05-19-2009, 10:04 PM

Thanks yeah they are all basically the same but I will see if I can get just one up. I have this one which was a little easier, I didnt try to connect the manji section at the end but its almost the same run basically. As the day went on I tried going faster and connecting everything.

YouTube - omar single rearview perfect hairpin

05-16-2009, 04:48 PM	#1
mkomar24 Leaky Injector Join Date: May 2008 Location: St. Louis Posts: 97 Trader Rating: (5) Feedback Score: 5 reviews	Please critique my run.... I had some footage from our last event in STL and I made a short video that cuts between three camera angles. There is no spots left out I just randomly selected different angles to be shown at different times so its the whole run. Im kind of new to the track thing so I would love any input on what a better line would be or where I could add speed angle whatever. Its an S13 with blacktop SR 13psi, exhaust intake, JIC coilovers, and 16 inch tires. Any input would be awesome! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urTOG...e=channel_page

05-17-2009, 04:37 AM	#2
n_my_coupe Zilvia Junkie Join Date: May 2008 Location: socal riverside Age: 32 Posts: 507 Trader Rating: (6) Feedback Score: 6 reviews	keep it up man ....i cant say much i just started driving at adams kart track __________________ 97 Kouki FTW

05-17-2009, 05:21 AM	#4
Felipe Post Whore! Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: No pues wow Posts: 2,959 Trader Rating: (9) Feedback Score: 9 reviews	how many runs did that take to make? __________________ Late Night Crew #1

05-17-2009, 07:21 PM	#6
Sexy_Ninja Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: STL Age: 34 Posts: 99 Trader Rating: (1) Feedback Score: 1 reviews	omar. u da shit. __________________ Control Freaks

05-17-2009, 08:16 PM	#7
Team DET Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2008 Location: San Bernardino Posts: 770 Trader Rating: (13) Feedback Score: 13 reviews	i like good job __________________ (OΞO/- -\OΞO)

05-17-2009, 05:00 AM	#3
jussjepbrox Zilvia Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: san jose Age: 34 Posts: 266 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	YOUR KILLIN IT. good job get outside shots also

05-17-2009, 11:41 AM	#5
mkomar24 Leaky Injector Join Date: May 2008 Location: St. Louis Posts: 97 Trader Rating: (5) Feedback Score: 5 reviews	Actually this video was three individual runs one with each camera mount. Two mounts outside, one inside. The runs were all the same line with little variation so I could just cut between the three angles to try and show the best shot of each turn. I dont know much about editing so mabe this wasnt the best way to show it but it does show each corner, transition, and the only part that overlaps is where it shows an outside manji view looking back and then the inside manji view right near the end. Other than that it should show the whole course from start to end. Right at the end of the last two turns you can hear me get off the throttle as the car just keeps sliding and losing speed. Any advice on how to keep in the throttle but not fly off the edge of the track?

05-18-2009, 09:09 AM	#8
RMerritts Join Date: May 2009 Location: State College, PA Age: 33 Posts: 5 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Think i saw this over at the STL forums, not bad man, keep practicin youll get better.

05-18-2009, 09:14 PM	#9
JDMslide180 BANNED Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Florida Age: 32 Posts: 187 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	good shit bro... keep it up^^^

05-19-2009, 12:46 PM	#10
WagDatto Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Sacramento, NorCal Posts: 1,283 Trader Rating: (6) Rides Gallery: WagDatto Feedback Score: 6 reviews	Needs more rev-limiter! Haha, just kidding, clean run! I'm definitely feeling it! Best editing would be 3 views from ONE run, so when you cut to a different view, you can match it up so it's completely seamless as far as noise. It threw me off when you started the run and switched to outside view and the rev was way off. __________________ http://garagezoku.blogspot.com

05-19-2009, 01:14 PM	#11
haggard240 Leaky Injector Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: massillon ohio Age: 33 Posts: 91 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	you didn't spin out.. soo give it a __________________

05-19-2009, 01:26 PM	#12
J ROK Zilvia Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Lighthouse Point, FL Age: 37 Posts: 282 Trader Rating: (1) Feedback Score: 1 reviews	How can we critique the best of 3 diff. runs? It would make sense to watch all 3 runs. Good driving and nice track though. __________________ AERO-K GARAGE

05-19-2009, 08:34 PM	#13
s142jzkillav10 Zilvia Junkie Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Kill Devil Hills, NC aka OBX Posts: 309 Trader Rating: (5) Feedback Score: 5 reviews	Looks like some good runs too me. ++

05-19-2009, 10:04 PM	#14
mkomar24 Leaky Injector Join Date: May 2008 Location: St. Louis Posts: 97 Trader Rating: (5) Feedback Score: 5 reviews	Thanks yeah they are all basically the same but I will see if I can get just one up. I have this one which was a little easier, I didnt try to connect the manji section at the end but its almost the same run basically. As the day went on I tried going faster and connecting everything. YouTube - omar single rearview perfect hairpin

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