Write a Write a poem about your car... [Archive] - Zilvia.net Forums | Nissan 240SX (Silvia) and Z (Fairlady) Car Forum

Zexel

09-26-2001, 07:10 PM

hey wacked, I dug it man!! check mine...

Now I"m flying 90 on the highway -
I bought my 240 so it's a great day -
96 SE is what I got -
Race you and beat you on the spot -
With a red light turnin to green -
So much horsepower I tear your spline -
The race is over and I know I would win -
I'm in a good mood so I'll take her for a spin -
Around the block that turns into a race -
Lines are smooth with so much grace -
Now that is all for my 240 flow -
Punched the gas and go bitch go!!

It's ok, like I siad before, I don't have a 240, but that's how it's gonna be when I do!!!

09-26-2001, 07:32 PM

i just got to say,, dragonReborn and zexel, those r some sweet poems...  i was all like rapin them while is was readin'm..  we shoudl make a song!!.. u know AZN,, they make all those remixes about hondas and asian pride, we need a song about 240 pride up in here <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'> who can sing?

Zexel

09-26-2001, 08:13 PM

thanks AJ, I may write another one tonight.  i'm feeling the flow now!!! haha, I wrote one to my friend, it's tight.  but yeah, I'll probably write some more just for the fun of it.

Jay Wood

09-26-2001, 08:14 PM

As i kick silvia's ass around the turn,
I stop a second to smell the rubber burn,
It's a good thing that i was on target and didnt miss,
Because i would be pissed if i fell off a cliff while in the middle of my drift...or something like that...

09-26-2001, 08:48 PM

i write poems but this is just, um no! lol weirdos! (no offence)

09-26-2001, 08:54 PM

Chance Glasco © 1998

(yes this really is copyrighted, I wrote it a long time ago except I have a Five Point O mustang before....so I'll fix it.  I write all kinds of stupid silly songs.)

Drivin' Down the Road in my Two-Four-Oh,
nothing to do, no where to go.
I drive down the road, just a little bit further.
Up next to me pulls another rice burner.
CHORUS

Honda, Honda, you sound like a weed eater.
Honda, Honda, rice is what you feed her.
Honda, Honda, you sound like a weed eater.
Honda, Honda, rice is what you feed her.

Take it from me, it's not a racial slur,
it's the hundered horses, on a four cylinder.
Take it from me, it's not a racial thing,
it's the riced out civics, the annoying humming.

CHORUS again

(said in a whiny Honda driver voice)
Atleast, my car's not noisy.
A dollar of gas will take me all the way to boise.
In my trunk, I've got some hundred watt kickers.
All my windows have Japanese Stickers.

CHORUS again

(said in whiney honda boy voice again)
I don't use gas, although it is nice,
instead I fill up with Uncle Ben's Rice.
My spoiler so high, it'll clothes line bluejays,
it's too bad I can't drive under highways.

CHORUS

The End.

09-26-2001, 09:11 PM

My 240 SX keeps the Hondas in check
realizing they just got smoked
as they look back and recalect
on the distance from my bumper
to their front end
it's gonna take 3 decades for thier engines to mend.

I've got rear wheel drive
while others stay deprived
with their front wheel crap
and their speedometer cap.

Got more horses then a Kentucky Derby Stable
Stories of faster Honda's remain an old Fable.
My rearend differential
makes burnouts so essential
with backends sliden' faster then ninja guidan.

Word to your mom or something.

DragonReborn214

09-26-2001, 09:22 PM

Jay Wood, that was tight man.

Ne ways, mine was supposed to be a flow really, a poem in a sense.

09-26-2001, 10:16 PM

Lol, you guys are hillarious. I gotta go write a poem now. I'm not gonna let a bunch of guys win in this one. No offense, lol <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'>

Jay Wood

09-27-2001, 01:45 AM

Thanks Dragonreborn. I guess you cant go wrong when you talk about drifting...

misnomer

09-27-2001, 01:57 AM

oh, don't worry s13girl, you'll beat me on this one <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'> Buncha freaking psychopaths :-)

Of course, I mean that in the most polite way. . .

09-27-2001, 07:11 AM

Of course you do ! <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'> <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'> <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'>

Zexel

09-27-2001, 07:20 AM

Now I start her up and hear her purr -
I can do 70 just in 3rd -
I rev the rpms, then dump the clutch -
When I take her to the streets I have no such -
Of fear in my eyes cause I know I'm fast -
Watch my license plate while I pass -
You on the boulevard now I'm 3 cars ahead -
Need to go to sleep, cause all that speeds in your head -
You have a Honda and that's just sad -
After I beat you you get all mad -
Go pump 5 dollars and fill your tank -
Next time you see my you know you'll get spanked -

Not as good as my first one, but I just woke up.  so when I get home from school, I'll probably write another one!!  oh yeah, Jay Wood, that was sweet rhyme man.

groundzero

09-27-2001, 04:30 PM

I read your poems guys, and I love the way you expressed yourself with your car...Here is mine I hope you likes... It's called "Me loves her every moves"

Me loves her every moves...
We made love while we cruised/
Broke your engine in and got you loose/
You’re my girl, my lady that’s why I love to take good care of you.
I’ve heard you cry/ but still you were there for me/
When I hit 65, I felt you switch lanes nervously.
We followed the sunset, others watched you glow/
Even my friends told me we make a good couple.
I love the way you sleep at night/
Not scared of the dark you were always available while you were still parked.
The essence of you body is remarkably sweet/
Your inside keeps me warm like a hotel suite/
I roll down your window and you show off your beat/
Your confident looks shows you cannot be defeat.
Something about your eyes that makes people want to look/
I tell them “sorry fellas this girl is already took”.
I patted the dashboard and you replied with the sound of release/
Vrrrrooom!! Vrrrrooom!! You all warmed up baby? Peace.

Jay Wood

09-27-2001, 05:13 PM

groundzero, If it was up to me, id say that you won this contest...but yeah, nice poem.

groundzero

09-27-2001, 10:32 PM

Thanks Jay Wood, everyone else's poem was cool too. But thanks man...Can we get some more poems posted...I want to see more of what you guys got.

vancouvers14

09-28-2001, 02:55 PM

so how much crack-smoking was involved in this thread?

konkman

09-28-2001, 03:00 PM

Hey our femine side is located in our cars, it's only natural to get a little emotional when talking about something so dear to our hearts.  We love our cars...

     ...I think I'm gone to cry.....no,  I'm okay.  Really, I just got some brake dust in my eyes.

09-28-2001, 05:20 PM

Untitled

“Money can’t buy happiness”
Or so I thought before;
Then one Friday evening
I went to a performance store.
Me and Silvia.

Oh, what joy - oh, what love,
Excitement filled me head to toe,
Asked some questions, picked some items
Then I was broke and had to go.
Banks called to say hi.
* * *
I sit at the red patiently waiting
For a rice-boy to come by;
Soon I feel happy I spent all my money
On things that make him try
To catch up to a girl.

The fuel light just came on
And Nordstom’s has a sale
But I’m broke and my car is dope
All else just seems so pale…
Including my paint.

my240likenoother

09-28-2001, 09:11 PM

ok i have one

from my head down to my shoes
scout.. no 22's
check my baby momma
wip range rovers not hondas
ill spend it till its gone
dont know when im comming home
pop X and drink cris
my 240 is the SHIT

my240likenoother

09-28-2001, 09:22 PM

another one

fog lights beam car 99 surpream
car moter oil and the smell of gasolen
heading it to the turn i feal the ruber burn
now on the strate all they can see is the licens plate
the 2. 4. o. has got the go
to take first place

(Edited by my240likenoother at 12:24 am on Sep. 29, 2001)

AmericanBornSilvia

09-28-2001, 11:25 PM

Well its not really about my 240... but yeah <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'>

To all you ricers. You know who you are.

It's all about being all show and no go
with the spoiler so high and the chasis so low.

Yet, through the dark tint, and the bright fog-light glow,
I don't need a hint, because I already know,that despite all the decals and the loud exhaust noise,
it's a gutless car driven by them god-#### rice-boys!

If maneuvering is all you got,
go race around the parking lot.

Don't compete on the street
because your car will get beat.

They cut off, show off, mouth off, pi$$ people off..

Riced-up hatchback of Honda fame
pi$$sed me off to play his game
muffler bark, with no engine bite
I smoked'em good at the change of the light

Realpower had by the SR20 D-E-T,
Ate that four cylinder wimp alive!

I dont mean to hate, I dont mean to b!tch, but to sum it all off, your car aint worth sh!t.

=) excellent.

S13Grl

09-29-2001, 07:52 AM

Good job!!!! <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'>

S14Grl

12-13-2001, 08:45 PM

Thought I should bring this back up. It's a funny topic.

Impact

12-13-2001, 09:12 PM

I realize with out school
I am dumbening and thats not cool..

I drive a 91 240sx coupe
Silvia front end and things to soup..

No education should have got that sooner
I realize that this poem is not gooder..

uh..this sucks....ok bye...

AmericanBornSilvia

12-13-2001, 09:17 PM

It's all about being all show and no go
with the spoiler so high and the chasis so low.

Yet, through the dark tint, and the bright fog-light glow,
I don't need a hint, because I already know,that despite all the decals and the loud exhaust noise,
it's a gutless car driven by them god-#### rice-boys!

If maneuvering is all you got,
go race around the parking lot.

Don't compete on the street
because your car will get beat.

They cut off, show off, mouth off, pi$$ people off..

Riced-up hatchback of Honda fame
pi$$sed me off to play his game
muffler bark, with no engine bite
I smoked'em good at the change of the light

Realpower had by the SR20 D-E-T,
Ate that Honda Rocket wimp alive!

I dont mean to hate, I dont mean to bitch, but to sum it all off, your car aint worth shit.

Zenki Two40

12-13-2001, 10:11 PM

......a true poet

bing

12-13-2001, 10:59 PM

cannons the left of them
cannons to the right of them
cannons in front of them
volley and thunder!!!!!!

Rafeal De la Ghetto

let me know if you get it

bing

12-13-2001, 11:04 PM

Yo baby, it's getting kinda chilly outside
why dont you hop inside and we could go for a ride...

2-4-0
dont you know

sx stand for sex,
i aint hintin at nothin but you know it's up next.

the back seat is small so we could do it up here,
let me smooth out the beats and keep it in gear.
when we done we gets cuddlin till the windows get clear.

bing

12-13-2001, 11:16 PM

front engine, rear drive
240 keepin it live

civic's is whack'n their style be lackin
call me EGGS when i take their heads and get crackin!
stop to admire my ride and then i gets back'n

Zilvia reppin... posers get steppin,
dont stand a chance 'gainst my 2.4 litre weapon

light'em in first and purch'em in two...
hittin' the line every one through

wait a secong i lost ya. Where did you go???
cant see ya but i can still hear ya though.

need to get that fixed, oh shit thats you muffler
this aint no game, who you callin a hustler

dont need your money, hold on the them chips.
but my mom needs a car so i'll go ya for slips

(this is off the top of my head)

bing

12-13-2001, 11:18 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from bing on 10:59 pm on Dec. 13, 2001
cannons the left of them
cannons to the right of them
cannons in front of them
volley and thunder!!!!!!

Rafeal De la Ghetto

let me know if you get it
</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>

It's from the fresh prince back in the day

bing

12-13-2001, 11:20 PM

lemme know if you want more

240sxspeedracer1

12-13-2001, 11:21 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from my240likenoother on 11:11 pm on Sep. 28, 2001
ok i have one

from my head down to my shoes
scout.. no 22's
check my baby momma
wip range rovers not hondas
ill spend it till its gone
dont know when im comming home
pop X and drink cris
my 240 is the SHIT
</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
ok, do i smell law suit from some "millionaires"?

240sxspeedracer1

12-13-2001, 11:34 PM

yo check this shit:

one day I woke up
got in my shit,
called my nigga to say whats up,
to see if he wanted to dip
I told him about this racing spot up da block
nigga told me no doubt but dont forget about ur glock
we finally made it in all of my rush
to see these fucking hondas in such....
a mother fucking pose
that shit was a disgrace
that with all those lights, niggas couldnt keep pace
20 fog lights
20 lb wing
if u ask me
these niggas are sucking dingalings.
I burned, I squeaked, I made a loud noise
i played these mother f'rs like if they were lil fucking toys

in other words, a nigga be reppin' his 240, dogz, one love, peace

bing

12-13-2001, 11:40 PM

JL in the trunk
what you lookin at punk
thats me your hearing not your pioneer junk

those are nice stickers you got, attach'em yourself
i dont know how to drive your automatic, hear it's hard on the health.

oh now your revvin
guess you wanna lose,
should i stay in here, or should i just use my shoes?

are your seats broken, could you sit any lower...
you call that your girlfriend, i call that a whorer

she must be if she likes the car that you workin
same color as that tight ass shirt that she's hurtin'

nice exhuast, did you eat the soup that came in it?
heard you do the quarter in about half a minute

240sxspeedracer1

12-13-2001, 11:51 PM

that was really good bing, just one lil thingy...
whorer?<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/confused.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='???'>
its good anyway, #### its great

soon2Bsilvia

12-14-2001, 12:13 AM

Its Lil' Rube
In the 240 coupe
Takin' trips to Can Cun
Blowin up like a hot air balloon
So slick, My cartoon comin' soon
15's in my trunk kick like Kung-Fu
All Hondas, think you ballin like me
whatcha gonna do
what you got on your watch, I got on one tooth.
Look at my lights, Integs wanna bite
Fake ass Altezza lights on the back
Step up, ain't worth puttin up a fight
Nismo Riders takin' over
Good luck couldn't find you in a four leaf clover
Its you drive a honda, make your bitch my lover.

bing

12-14-2001, 01:17 AM

240sx
Bing is given the specs
100% in full effex

prigiddy-pride of the panthium
be breaking with the anthium
was racing these fellas, but now i canthium

shimmy-shim to the spot
lemme see whacha got
"civics are cool" at least thats whacha thought

hit ya with  the theory
hondas cant get near me
thought they was wicked, but their rides is weak and weary.

10 civics to 1 nissan
less style than bank but they can still get their lease on.

yes they fantasize but still they just your average guys
a scene that they've seen and wanna have that

it's fair enough for me to grab that, collectin pay-days
relaxin with my special lady, they know im the shit baby.

they can have their kittens, strings to their mittens but their never lettin go of being bitten by the need to fit in.

think their cars is different, but they as different as the others, civic brothers, hand me downs form their mothers.

if their cars were as tight as my rhymes they'd have a chance
but at least their handling is still tighter than their pants.
wait a second.... their cars will never be that tight

MC Bing... out

bing

12-14-2001, 01:22 AM

i couldnt sleep, i was making up rhymes...

canthium = cant see them.... hahaha i love that one

and 'lease on', thats the shit too.

almost all of this shit is off the top of my heas... this is fun, but i need some one to battle

96SEChick

12-14-2001, 07:04 AM

Bing--you're awesome.  I tried to think of something to write, but I know that I couldn't compete with yours or anyone else's that was posted.  

240enthusiast

12-14-2001, 07:21 AM

you say write a poem.. everyone becomes a thugged out rapper.. Interesting.  Carry on

whateverjames

12-14-2001, 08:01 AM

it's urban poetry yo
<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'>
i never could write a poem, if i did, it would be bad.      it wouldn't be a rap though i can tell you that. hah

(Edited by whateverjames at 11<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>5 am on Dec. 14, 2001)

240sxspeedracer1

12-14-2001, 09:27 AM

yo bing, u say u wanna battle?
u cant fuck with this mathmatical

nigga called the speedracer
even my bitch be racing, all u could do is chase her

u kickin all this weak shit about ur weak 240
i got the real shit to kick for all my homies

i saw u in the club
i didnt show u love
look at my car
its rollin on dubs

yo dog im still in first
why u cant catch me, nigga u redlineing second
next to my AK, the 240 is my weapon

check out my ride
this shit got mad buttons
dont make me hit one
ill be out in seconds

yo bing
u say ur shit is da bomb
i guess u didnt know
this is speedracer, the mother fucking don

What nigga, bring it, hahahahah

(Edited by 240sxspeedracer1 at 11:29 am on Dec. 14, 2001)

Zenki Two40

12-14-2001, 09:45 AM

cool. i just think it's funny when ppl use "nigga" for stuff like that, isn't bing asian, haha. not sayin' ur stuff is stupid though.

NoTuchn

12-14-2001, 10:18 AM

i love you all! these are great, you guys! personal opinion: its a tie between groundzero and AmericanBornSilvia.  im not even goin to aptempt poetry, so ill let yous continue... its great! <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'>

Zenki Two40

12-14-2001, 10:49 AM

i like bings so far.

Kid Zelda

12-14-2001, 12:15 PM

haha, this is funny $hit...lemme try !

my car is like my own personal universe
she's my drug and it only takes twelve bucks to fill 'er up
but in my galaxy there ain't no room for Earth
so I'm leavin it cuz I can feel the oil pressure building up
turning over the ignition of my solar system
check the gauges, pushin the tape, put my foot on the break
shift existance like my cigarette
and take it state to state until I crash into my fate

kitoro

12-14-2001, 01:43 PM

how aboot someone do something about Nissans in general? ^.^
lol.... you guys are getting a tad crazy.

kitoro

12-14-2001, 01:55 PM

okay.. i'm super bored. studying is not going well rite now.
so i'm going to add my own lil poem about Nissan:

"Nissan"

Ever heard of the Skyline GTR?
Or heard of the legendary Nissan Z Cars?
They're two huge players in the import scene,
they're killer Nissan racing machines.
Turbocharged and rear-wheel-drive,
They blow by you on the 1/4 mile.
Don't forget, you also got your 180 and Silvia,
those cars have got the import flava
They're fast, small and have the looks to show
And they have the powerplants to make them GO
Whether's it's the VG, RB, KA or the SR-twenty
These cars are of the best of the 20th century <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'>

(Edited by kitoro at 1:58 pm on Dec. 14, 2001)

Kid Zelda

12-14-2001, 02:21 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from kitoro on 1:55 pm on Dec. 14, 2001
okay.. i'm super bored. studying is not going well rite now.
so i'm going to add my own lil poem about Nissan:

"Nissan"

Ever heard of the Skyline GTR?
Or heard of the legendary Nissan Z Cars?
They're two huge players in the import scene,
they're killer Nissan racing machines.
Turbocharged and rear-wheel-drive,
They blow by you on the 1/4 mile.
Don't forget, you also got your 180 and Silvia,
those cars have got the import flava
They're fast, small and have the looks to show
And they have the powerplants to make them GO
Whether's it's the VG, RB, KA or the SR-twenty
These cars are of the best of the 20th century <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=';)'>

(Edited by kitoro at 1:58 pm on Dec. 14, 2001)
</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>

Thumbs.....DOWN ! nice try..... too much clutter....

240sxspeedracer1

12-14-2001, 03:10 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from Kid Zelda on 2:15 pm on Dec. 14, 2001
haha, this is funny $hit...lemme try !

my car is like my own personal universe
she's my drug and it only takes twelve bucks to fill 'er up
but in my galaxy there ain't no room for Earth
so I'm leavin it cuz I can feel the oil pressure building up
turning over the ignition of my solar system
check the gauges, pushin the tape, put my foot on the break
shift existance like my cigarette
and take it state to state until I crash into my fate

</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
u know, just for giving kitoro that thumbs down, id like to give u two thumbs down for the simple fact that ur joint sucked balls.  too vague, and doesn't pull the reader into the poem----
how's that for reader analysis?

Kid Zelda

12-14-2001, 03:34 PM

My joint sucked! ? what joint?  Were u watching me, as I passed it to the left hand side ! ?

I just said I didn't like it...thats all, It started off good, but it seems like he was trying to hard to include lots of Nissan stuff....man....chill out......

240sxspeedracer1.......I'm not amussed by your display.
Don't want this to be a flame......

Thats good for a readers analysis....  Headaches and woes

240sxspeedracer1

12-14-2001, 03:42 PM

(Edited by 240sxspeedracer1 at 5:49 pm on Dec. 14, 2001)

240sxspeedracer1

12-14-2001, 03:47 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from Kid Zelda on 5:34 pm on Dec. 14, 2001
My joint sucked! ? what joint? Were u watching me, as I passed it to the left hand side ! ?

I just said I didn't like it...thats all, It started off good, but it seems like he was trying to hard to include lots of Nissan stuff....man....chill out......

240sxspeedracer1.......I'm not amussed by your display.
Don't want this to be a flame......

Thats good for a readers analysis.... Headaches and woes

</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
nobody is trying to flame you, why did u take it personal?  Is it because of all the recent bickering amongst people that now u gotta be all sensitive, come on, don't let my personal opinion get u so down, ur's did suck though. And I'm not here to amuse you, so don't think ur supposed to laugh.  keep smoking ur blunts.

Kid Zelda

12-14-2001, 04:41 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote:
nobody is trying to flame you, why did u take it personal? Is it because of all the recent bickering amongst people that now u gotta be all sensitive, come on, don't let my personal opinion get u so down, ur's did suck though. And I'm not here to amuse you, so don't think ur supposed to laugh. keep smoking ur blunts.
</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Personal...nope, I didn't.....

Your opinion didn't get me down, up, left, right..etc......

Mine did suck..yeah I know......thanks

I don't smoke anything........I was joking.
And you do amuse  me.

Here, this we asume you:

Hence forth, step within my psychoanalysis
callouses upon my mind make me strain for my lines
out I ripped it, squeeeeezed YOUR brain: it made some liquid
drained it in a cup and then I sipped it
Kid Zelda! Your life let me clutch it
thoughts take flight so fit the Slug in your pipe and take a puff kid
fuck it! I heat it like a tea pot - steam hot
upon the roof: shoot a marble with the verbal slingshot
take aim, here I came, I'm the same
Back in '98, I'da tag my name upon your window pane
stained the mind: a deep shade of residue
voices within the head make choices multiple
multiply , Zelda a little buzz
and my 240 is the scuds, cuz here come the judge
blasted; so past the kid a insult so we can paint this
image of the gifted-anxious, to flip the language
it's the noun meltdown from the outer-shell
now smell the burning flesh fresh from the ####-bound
and come on down here, this mind path, I'm half-
mathematic Atmospheric staff with the rhyme craft
comin to capture, your after-laughter
while I'm hangin from this rafter, I have to rip this rapture
cuz the cramps in my stomach, dismantle
when I tamper wit your amplify, you ####-you die

Stop acting like a complex simpleton 240SPDracer

AceInHole

12-14-2001, 07:44 PM

LoL.... for the #### of it

Ya'll ain't doin nuthin but frontin
so let me explain somethin

you're double clutchin
but headed in a straight line
since you lack the right skills
to turn at the same time
you're callin it drift
it's nuthin but a late sign
of simple oversteer
cuz you don't listen to mine
and the things I say.
I thought I told you every-day
"you do it this way, turn here not there"
but you're so full of yourself
you get sideways and dirty underwear
simply because you're scared
to sh!t, of the speed you said you need
keep runnin that straight line
that's how ALL the rookies feed.

meanwhile lemme kick this in reverse
if you can explain somethin you ain't frontin on nothin

separate oversteer from drift
and the baddest skill from the worst
you enter it swift
brake late and sway the opposite first
kick it back around and hit opposite lock
by lettin the throttle off
gettin the throttle back on
burnin rubbers till all of em gone
keep focused, don't hesitate
swing through and find
the next line will be straight
who needs more than stock power
and three thousand pounds of weight
bald tires and late hours
that's how we "seize the day."

bing

12-14-2001, 08:16 PM

okay, okay, im eating soup and rhymin away
maxin, relaxin at the end of the day

i comes on the forum sees kids being slutty,
saying 'but you' 'but i' and 'but he'

no need to be frettin or sweatin each other...
every boy here is a Zilvia brother...

yeah im half asian, aint talking bout nigga.
u wont catch me bling blingin, wont see me jigg jigga.

when i gets on the board i get a little free speakin...
leave it up to s14grl to do the peace keepin.

not braggin of drugs, or the way that i ball.
i got schoolin, a car and a girl and thats all.

we needs to stop fighting and act with decorum
or we is just like every other forum.

this is Bing preaching fact'n
haters be distractin
retractin the unity of Zilvia net.

better yet, dont get upset,
i get and you get to be real on this set.

word to west.
sites the best.
need to get things straight, get the shit off me chest.

Zilvia.net to the limits and later...
love the lovers and hates to the hater

bing

12-14-2001, 08:20 PM

cool............................

bing

12-14-2001, 09:40 PM

any more???

AceInHole

12-14-2001, 09:53 PM

LoL... i'm already cutting away at my finals studying <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

240sxspeedracer1

12-14-2001, 09:54 PM

[/quote from Kid zelda/]
Here, this we asume you:

Hence forth, step within my psychoanalysis
callouses upon my mind make me strain for my lines
out I ripped it, squeeeeezed YOUR brain: it made some liquid
drained it in a cup and then I sipped it
Kid Zelda! Your life let me clutch it
thoughts take flight so fit the Slug in your pipe and take a puff kid
fuck it! I heat it like a tea pot - steam hot
upon the roof: shoot a marble with the verbal slingshot
take aim, here I came, I'm the same
Back in '98, I'da tag my name upon your window pane
stained the mind: a deep shade of residue
voices within the head make choices multiple
multiply , Zelda a little buzz
and my 240 is the scuds, cuz here come the judge
blasted; so past the kid a insult so we can paint this
image of the gifted-anxious, to flip the language
it's the noun meltdown from the outer-shell
now smell the burning flesh fresh from the ####-bound
and come on down here, this mind path, I'm half-
mathematic Atmospheric staff with the rhyme craft
comin to capture, your after-laughter
while I'm hangin from this rafter, I have to rip this rapture
cuz the cramps in my stomach, dismantle
when I tamper wit your amplify, you ####-you die

Stop acting like a complex simpleton 240SPDracer

If you wrote this then I must say that you are the freaking man. But seriously, where did u get it from?
that was really off the freaking meters.
I dont know how people come up with this kind of stuff but if you gonna ryhme like that then I give up:shocked:

(Edited by 240sxspeedracer1 at 11:56 pm on Dec. 14, 2001)

12-15-2001, 12:26 AM

bing,, u should remix a song or about 240's.. ur rhymes are tiiight.. especially that last post.. that was unreal, u should become a free style rapper and make it big.  don't forget about us when ur on top daawg!

Kid Zelda

12-15-2001, 01:02 AM

If you wrote this then I must say that you are the freaking man. But seriously, where did u get it from?
that was really off the freaking meters.
I dont know how people come up with this kind of stuff but if you gonna ryhme like that then I give up:shocked:

(Edited by 240sxspeedracer1 at 11:56 pm on Dec. 14, 2001)

I don't know...I just come up with this $hit.....thanks for the comments....its all good.....we can be friends again

Just for fun:

Now… 240sxspeedracer kicked my ass
I’m not goanna lie I ain’t goanna laugh
It wasn’t fun…but fuck it I’m gonna get my gun
Shit gets done like that in the world of rap
If they pushing on your pride you just a pussy if it slides
So I sprit up 3 flights didn’t do the feet wipe at the door
Tracking dirt and blood on the rug and wooden floor
Couldn’t believe my friends just stood there and watched
Word to god  Blankflip telling me to blame it on my cock
I’m amped  and I’ma shoot ever motherfucker out there
I’m ill and I’ma prove that shit when I get back down stairs
Into the bedroom my passion aimed at the closet
Visualizing the top shelf that’s where the shoebox is
I push the top up enough to fit my hand in
Reach into the box in a frieze realizing that its empty
Hand rest in the box  head rest in an open stun
Then I remember I don’t even own a gun…..

Hehehe, funny huh…..

bing

12-15-2001, 07:38 AM

so i guess fightin is what you think is right'n
peace be outta sight'n, despite the how my rhymes is tight, ya'll gonna ignore that words that write

or maybe not.maybe we turn a corner
days is brighter nights is warmer
changin shape like trigidy-transformer

like i says before, Zilvia reppin is in store...
240's galore, hangin them trips up on the door
might try but can t ignore, knowing that ther is more...

the rhyme continues, changes venues,
keeps the party moving until the beat is in you's

collectively agree, the love for 240
hate for all thats' ricey,

guest be on the look out-
loggin in and signing the book out-
gettin together like we havin a cook out-
DSC no need to put that picture of the lock out-

never did the trick anyway... j/k
we could save it for another day
threads okay. rhynin is here to stay...

got them things out
this is what Bing's bout

Bing's out....

chickenmanq

12-15-2001, 01:14 PM

Here you go. Took me all morning. Then again, I got up at 12. Late night. Not drinking the rest of the weekend.

Ode to a SOCH KA truck. (Eleanor)

How many times have we brushed with death?
I feel an urge to rally; I take in a deep breath.
Get in the truck, sit down, turn the key.
The engine roars to life and the truck rattles freely.

I ignore the rattles; stomp the gas.
The engine sounds fine, the KA will rev to the last.
The throttle body gate flaps it's wings.
The tires flap accordingly as the rubber sings.

Crank the stereo; it's Megadeath.
Roll next to a pseudo homie, my system is best.
He seems cranky as he looks my way.
We race off the line; his little purple Saturn pays.

Out of town, cruising on the highway,
Turn off at Winona, Grand Falls road is where I play.
Running dirt road at seventy-five,
All four wheels off the ground, and sliding side to side.

Rallying done, I head to the mall.
Fifty thousand dollar sport-ute is in the next stall.
I park my dented two wheel drive
Hoity toity schmucks hate me; I devalue their ride.

Nightfall comes, I'm ready to go home.
Down sixty-six toward fourth street, the last stoplights to roam.
No one wants to race, but that's okay.
Eleanor and I, know tomorrow's another day.

(Edited by chickenmanq at 1:24 pm on Dec. 15, 2001)

my240likenoother

08-01-2002, 08:34 PM

i was using the search for the first time in i dont know how long, saw this and thought I would bring it up agen!! <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

bing

08-01-2002, 08:54 PM

wow, it seemed cool at the time but some of the rhymes i wrote were pretty ghey....

but still better than most of the others

me thinks we should start this up again with a diferent flavour.

show tunes style:

oh my darlin, oh my darlin, oh my darlin 2-40

how about some H-I-D, 2 for you and 2 for me.

whaddya think???

matic 240sx

08-01-2002, 09:26 PM

i try and try, more money, more time..
still not there, i keep trying to get there..

still nothing, its better, its faster...
but whats wrong? why do i want more?

do i love it?  or do i love what i do to it?
am i addicted to it? or am i addicted to what i do to it?

i can not stop, i can not stop the thoughts..
everyday, everynight... i plan, i think, i work...

but nothing is enough, nothing makes me stop
its my heaven and my hell,  its my life and my heart

yet its nothing more than metal, and plastic..
but its warm, and talks to me, it tells me whats wrong
it tells whats right...

when its down and apart, im down and apart...
when its with me, we are a team, an unbeatable team..

free from what others say, and what others do..
its always there for me and always mine, it will not cheat
will not lie, and will not leave..  

but could i leave it?..  could i?

no.. never...