Yo, check out this flow!

[graphikg04]

Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace   Here it is.

My 240sx Flow

I drive a 240sx
And I take turns on every apex
My drifts are so tight like latex
My engine torque makes my front wheels lift
At the straight line and the sliding drift
I do it naturally I call it my gift
So smooth and so swift
That’s true you are afraid of the SR20DET
Silvia turbo spooling nice and free
Fireballs out of the exhaust
Everything is in my car I don’t care about the cost
You can tell because we are at the end and you just lost
You tried to keep up but you spun out and tossed
You just lost hope you spun out of the track
I'll even wait for you until you come back
And before you know it you will be lapped
I stay in 1st, 2nd is where you are trapped
There is no way you can win I always defeat
You thought you were good and I turned you into track meat
I only have one turbo but it seems like a fleet  
Nobody can compete when I sit in that seat

The Silvia emblem representing strong
My turbo boosts all day long
My car looks sexier than a girl in a thong
You are trying to race me? You got it all wrong
The engine revs make you pee your pants, but to me its a song
Because my engine came all the way from Hong Kong
My Potenza tires creating grip
I make racing look like a grocery trip
My car is so fast I make the world miss a revolution
Pressing the pedal harder is my solution
Now its time for me to get to my conclusion
I am graphikG, so backing off is yo resolution
PEACE

Tight huh?                                 graphikG

[matic 240sx]

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> dear god...

[95exlude]

i dont want to be harsh, but i think im with matic on this one...

[ca18guy]

HAHAHA man that is awesome.

[BEISSEN]

Oh my lord another oneabe sorry but that just did not rhyme all that well parts did but not a very good rap"if thats what it was".I am witht the rest of the guys.

[toddnappi]

that was pretty good. ever make beats on the computer? a couple of my friends have programs and have made some cool songs. you should try it out.

[s14]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA, my first post and its on this rap...Lord have mercy, the second verse was better than the first, but i was laughing the whole time... aight, now to go look at the real 240 stuff




S14

[95exlude]

ur engine came from hong kong? try japan...
and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow...
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; sorry i couldnt resist

[SR20Fastback]

You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it &nbsp;<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

[matic 240sx]

if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop..

[whateverjames]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 01 2002,7:58)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">ur engine came from hong kong? try japan...
and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow...
sorry i couldnt resist</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
it's possible that one could import an SR from hong kong.

[Rikadyn]

hmm...funny...MOVE prolly would record it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

[95exlude]

sr was designed and blueprinted in japan &nbsp; <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hehe.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hehe:'>

[Rikadyn]

still would be possible to import a SR from Hong Kong...also</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>

[One-Eighty SX]

i think it was ahite but it could have better flow to it as well. Also the Sr20 maybe designed and blueprinted in japan but u forget 95exlude that japan can sell their cars to other countries as well. So im sure its possible to import it from hong kong. Just that its home is japan that is all

[95exlude]

well transams are manufactured in canada...that doesnt mean they arent domestics -best example i can give ya

[DriftMonkey]

man you guys r harsh as hell....although i dont even like rap...i thought it was pretty good and i bet that half of you couldnt even write something as good....you ever try to write a poem...or a rap...it's hard as hell...props to you graphik

[graphikg04]

Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG

&nbsp; And drift monkey is right. A poem or a rap is not an easy thing to do. You try doing it and let me see how it is, I would love to see it. And just for your information. This was a freestyle while I was typing. When I take my time I write things that seem professional. I write poems for girls and all, and they never fail. I can get any girl with any of my poems. If you want to test me, you can email me. I will give you a copy of the poem. Then you can give it to a girl you like, and I bet she will fall dead for you. YES, I am that confident. Ive done it more than enough times. If you want to test me, my email is -- &nbsp;[email protected] -- PEACE

[camppain]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (matic 240sx @ Sep. 03 2002,07:25)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop..</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
im with the rest of them in saying its not good. i used to flow and i made beats but its not something imma make money
off of.

the rhyme scheme was to simple. to much first person "my 240 this" "i am beter at this" no real creativity imho. plus just cause its about a 240 does it make it a chat topic?

[95exlude]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (graphikg04 @ Sep. 02 2002,9:14)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Well you did what you wanted, it did make some of us laugh...and if they consider that talent then we have found exactly what is wrong with the music industry today. &nbsp;We are just giving ya a hard time bro

[shady]

why dont you post some of these proffesional raps or poems that can get any girl so we can laugh at you some more

[-E-]

I liked it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

[95exlude]

"Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace &nbsp; Here it is.
"

i dont think something you wrote the day before is considered freestyle...

[Yonkaz914]

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

[AceInHole]

<!--QuoteBegin--SR20Fastback+Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>7)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
if it was on the radio it'd be playing on 3 different stations on repeat... then again look at radio quality :puke:

"it's gettin hot in herre"

[95exlude]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (Yonkaz914 @ Sep. 02 2002,10:27)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Why Did You Capitalize Every Word In That Sentence?

[SR20Fastback]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 02 2002,8:55)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it <!--emo&<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
if it was on the radio it'd be playing on 3 different stations on repeat... then again look at radio quality :puke:

"it's gettin hot in herre"</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Oh sooooooo fucking sick of that nelly song, not even funny &nbsp;<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/mad.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':angry:'> I was just tryin to say lay off the guy, he was just messin around and some people started layin into him pretty hard. It was just supposed to be something to laugh at, not something to use against him for flames...

[matic 240sx]

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/dozingoff.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':zzz:'> &nbsp;what are you guys defending him for? &nbsp;we are just saying our opinions.. &nbsp;and my opinion is it sucked.. &nbsp;tho im pretty sure that 80% of the hip-hop community will agree with me.. the other 20% will be to high to make a clear decision.. &nbsp;

most of you listen to that cracka sh*t :x

and yes.. im white &nbsp;<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

[S13Grl]

You guys are too harsh. Let's not get out of control.

[AceInHole]

you know, what's really funny is that in winter I roll on Blizzaks,
but people too used to the radio might just think my tires are black.

[SR20Fastback]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 02 2002,9:33)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">you know, what's really funny is that in winter I roll on Blizzaks,
but people too used to the radio might just think my tires are black.</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Now thats comedy &nbsp;<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'> &nbsp;<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

[Yonkaz914]

<!--QuoteBegin--95exlude+Sep. 03 2002,12<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 03 2002,12<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>8)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (Yonkaz914 @ Sep. 02 2002,10:27)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Why Did You Capitalize Every Word In That Sentence?</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Cause Thats How I Type. <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/dozingoff.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':zzz:'>

[KiDyNomiTe]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 02 2002,10:14)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">"Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace Here it is.
"

i dont think something you wrote the day before is considered freestyle...</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Where did he say freestyle, flow doesnt mean freestyle, it just like sayin rhyme in a way. To me the best rhymes just come out of nowhere, and most don't write it down. I have made a couple pretty good rhymes that I pulled out of my ass, but they would never make it into production, unless it's a comedy cd. Sometimes you just sit there with your friends and start singing/rappin for no reason and make something that goes well, but then when you try its soo horrible.

Anyway about your rhyme, it might make a good poem, or a slow rap song.

You get an A for Effort <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'> .

And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

[AceInHole]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 02 2002,5:12)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
heheh.... how about Aesop Rock or old Deltron 3030 stuff?

[KiDyNomiTe]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 03 2002,4:18)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 02 2002,5:12)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
heheh.... how about Aesop Rock or old Deltron 3030 stuff?</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
I got a couple Del CDs, ad as you can see in my avatar (but most of you don't know), I like Hieroglyphics (Dels in it), but they kinda old, but still around, juss less active. I got some Aesop songs too. its all good. My winamp list is wierd cuz my bro likes to listen to like Chicago Rappers (most are gansta rap type things), and I like Hip-Hop, then there is juss some regular rap. Got so much shit on my playlist.

O ya don't forget Pep Love (part of hiero), Sage Francis, and, Atmosphere, some good white guys out there <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

[Loren]

post one of those poems on here.. i'll try it, and get back to you

[SR20Fastback]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 03 2002,2:39)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 03 2002,4:18)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 02 2002,5:12)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
heheh.... how about Aesop Rock or old Deltron 3030 stuff?</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
I got a couple Del CDs, ad as you can see in my avatar (but most of you don't know), I like Hieroglyphics (Dels in it), but they kinda old, but still around, juss less active. I got some Aesop songs too. its all good. My winamp list is wierd cuz my bro likes to listen to like Chicago Rappers (most are gansta rap type things), and I like Hip-Hop, then there is juss some regular rap. Got so much shit on my playlist.

O ya don't forget Pep Love (part of hiero), Sage Francis, and, Atmosphere, some good white guys out there <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
So does your brother like Twista?? <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'>

[graphikg04]

Ya Kidynomite is right. Eternal Reflections with Hi-tek and Talib is a tight cd. I liked Blackstar too, with Mos Def. And Atmosphere is pretty tight too. You got some good taste man. And Loren, just give me your email and Ill send it. PEACE

graphikG

[KiDyNomiTe]

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 03 2002,4:47)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 03 2002,2:39)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 03 2002,4:18)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (KiDyNomiTe @ Sep. 02 2002,5:12)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
heheh.... how about Aesop Rock or old Deltron 3030 stuff?</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
I got a couple Del CDs, ad as you can see in my avatar (but most of you don't know), I like Hieroglyphics (Dels in it), but they kinda old, but still around, juss less active. I got some Aesop songs too. its all good. My winamp list is wierd cuz my bro likes to listen to like Chicago Rappers (most are gansta rap type things), and I like Hip-Hop, then there is juss some regular rap. Got so much shit on my playlist.

O ya don't forget Pep Love (part of hiero), Sage Francis, and, Atmosphere, some good white guys out there <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
So does your brother like Twista?? <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
yup, I would post more but I did and it got lost. But he listens to the whole Chi-Town people.