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Kuma · 06-12-2014, 05:11 PM

This is my brother's new short comic/web comic... Check it out. possibly NSFW (Violence)

http://literatipressok.com/index.php/target-practice-2/

Let me know what you think. His twitter is also at the bottom of the link. Share the link with your friends if you like it.

He said he will be updating it every 2 weeks.

Edited: 6/20/14
Updated

This week's is 3 pages.
http://literatipressok.com/index.php/lovely-exchange/

simmode1 · 06-12-2014, 06:53 PM

I only see 1 page...

Kuma · 06-12-2014, 08:02 PM

it's a mini thing he'll be doing every 2 weeks. he has some full issues of his main comic called " Welcome to Ralton". you should be able to order them on the web site.

simmode1 · 06-13-2014, 09:24 AM

Ain't nobody got time for that. He should just wait until he has a completed issue & post it all together.

gusisboosted · 06-13-2014, 11:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by simmode1

Ain't nobody got time for that. He should just wait until he has a completed issue & post it all together.

Yeah what he said.

Releasing on a bi weekly schedule might work for a comic which has an established fan base and following.

But for some one who is barely getting into the flow of things this will bring absolute failure, until he has enough content for people to make a connections to the characters and story.

I like his ideas and direction, his art style is also very nice.
But sadly his marketing approach is terrible and unless he reworks that, this webcomic is doomed to never be read and recognized.

Kuma · 06-13-2014, 06:47 PM

He said the next update will be three pages. I'm trying to get him to put the ones he did for a local paper online also. Thanks for the feedback.

I just went to try and find more info on my brother's main comicbook project (Welcome to Ralton) and found out they don't even have all 4 issues for sale on the website. Not to mention the description that his publisher wrote is terrible. You all are right, he needs better marketing... He needs a better publisher.

The comic is about a guy that has super powers that were given to him by the devil. He neither wants to be a superhero or villain. He just wants to be a family man and live a normal life.

Yet the description written by the publisher is "With elements of gritty realism, fantasy, and superhero action, Welcome to Ralton is an examination of the toll hero-ing has on the family left behind. By Don Rosencrans and Cole Johnson."
http://literatipressok.com/index.php...e-to-ralton-2/

Thank you very much for your feedback.

simmode1 · 06-13-2014, 08:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kuma

The comic is about a guy that has super powers that were given to him by the devil. He neither wants to be a superhero or villain. He just wants to be a family man and live a normal life.

Sooo.... Spawn?

Kuma · 06-15-2014, 12:18 AM

Negative.

Kuma · 06-20-2014, 02:21 PM

Updated

This week's is 3 pages.
http://literatipressok.com/index.php/lovely-exchange/

Kuma · 07-08-2014, 05:46 PM

Tomorrows hamburgers.
http://literatipressok.com/index.php...ws-hamburgers/

tingnitureok · 07-15-2014, 07:27 PM

Releasing on a bi weekly schedule might work for a comic which has an established fan base and following.

Kuma · 07-18-2014, 10:11 PM

my brother has a fairly large local following. I'm just continuing to post them incase anyone cares to see more.

06-12-2014, 05:11 PM	#1
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Check out my brother's new web comic (manga/anime influenced) This is my brother's new short comic/web comic... Check it out. possibly NSFW (Violence) http://literatipressok.com/index.php/target-practice-2/ Let me know what you think. His twitter is also at the bottom of the link. Share the link with your friends if you like it. He said he will be updating it every 2 weeks. Edited: 6/20/14 Updated This week's is 3 pages. http://literatipressok.com/index.php/lovely-exchange/ Last edited by Kuma; 06-20-2014 at 02:22 PM..

06-12-2014, 06:53 PM	#2
simmode1 Post Whore! Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Addison, TX Posts: 5,526 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	I only see 1 page... __________________ "Simplicity is the key to brilliance." - Bruce Lee

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simmode1 Post Whore! Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Addison, TX Posts: 5,526 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Ain't nobody got time for that. He should just wait until he has a completed issue & post it all together. __________________ "Simplicity is the key to brilliance." - Bruce Lee

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06-12-2014, 08:02 PM	#3
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	it's a mini thing he'll be doing every 2 weeks. he has some full issues of his main comic called " Welcome to Ralton". you should be able to order them on the web site.

06-13-2014, 06:47 PM	#6
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	He said the next update will be three pages. I'm trying to get him to put the ones he did for a local paper online also. Thanks for the feedback. I just went to try and find more info on my brother's main comicbook project (Welcome to Ralton) and found out they don't even have all 4 issues for sale on the website. Not to mention the description that his publisher wrote is terrible. You all are right, he needs better marketing... He needs a better publisher. The comic is about a guy that has super powers that were given to him by the devil. He neither wants to be a superhero or villain. He just wants to be a family man and live a normal life. Yet the description written by the publisher is "With elements of gritty realism, fantasy, and superhero action, Welcome to Ralton is an examination of the toll hero-ing has on the family left behind. By Don Rosencrans and Cole Johnson." http://literatipressok.com/index.php...e-to-ralton-2/ Thank you very much for your feedback.

06-15-2014, 12:18 AM	#8
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Negative.

06-20-2014, 02:21 PM	#9
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Updated This week's is 3 pages. http://literatipressok.com/index.php/lovely-exchange/

07-08-2014, 05:46 PM	#10
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Tomorrows hamburgers. http://literatipressok.com/index.php...ws-hamburgers/

07-15-2014, 07:27 PM	#11
tingnitureok Join Date: Jul 2014 Location: CA Age: 36 Posts: 2 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Releasing on a bi weekly schedule might work for a comic which has an established fan base and following.

07-18-2014, 10:11 PM	#12
Kuma Zilvia Addict Join Date: May 2012 Location: The last house on the right Age: 35 Posts: 758 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	my brother has a fairly large local following. I'm just continuing to post them incase anyone cares to see more.