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Old 07-10-2012, 03:37 PM   #15
emeraldking23
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Originally Posted by simmode1 View Post
I don't mind the music much. It was meh... But I really didn't like the visuals. I don't really know enough about camera work to put a finger on it, but the editing seemed lackluster and the footage was soooo bright. Seems like it could have used some kind of shading and some slo-mo for dramatic effect at key moments during the song.

I try to offer constructive criticism if at all possible. I see you grinding, trying to come up man! I liked this video, but again, some slo-mo shots would have been dope here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X5cwlQ7RLzQ

I think this video has some good styling tips to draw from:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nwaNx9YLGOg
I appreciate the comments man, my editing does need a lot of work. After working on it for a while I get lazy on editing to the music, but hey I can always do it for my future ones. My next video will probably be for Formula D on the 21st, ill definitely have to go hard on that one.
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