| hanzbrady |
04-06-2017 06:02 AM |
Ditch the overly done color correcting or in this case color fucking, copywrite music, dead time of just sitting around doing stuff that's inaudible and makes me think of times I was black out drunk at a party trying to figure out what's going on, shakey cam, cinematic black bars, and shoot on an actual camera and not just a go pro and you might have something.
Film making isn't for the faint of heart, and if it's done just for fun it reflects in your work. I'm not saying you have to go buy thousands of dollars worth of gear but make the video tell a damn story and be enjoyable to watch.
You basically gave us a stupid intro that led to a prolonged time lapse of weird angles and awkward body language while trying to put an engine in a car that was shot entirely in 90-110* POV which is exhausting to look at.
The timelapses you used are also sped up video clips which make them hard to watch, film them with an iPhone in timelapse mode instead. A real timelapse is actually several photos compressed into a video format kinda like a GIF and results in a smoother easier to watch experience.
If these are your first steps into video production I can understand the flaws but please strive for better work if you expect to build an audience, watch Casey Niestat and Sawyer Hartman's camera reviews and vlogging advice videos and you'll learn more about how to make videos in to stories worth watching.
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