So I Filmed my first commercial for my company
 

So I filmed my 1st commercial this past week tell me what you think about it don't be afraid to get in the comments section

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https://youtu.be/wqMCD-JCMw4

I hope it's not IT company because your video is not working.

It works on my end.
Congrats on your business venture! I did not see the name of the barbershop when the video started. I have to pause it then play it again. There will always be room for improvement. It is not that bad.

i've found that recently, tons of photos and videos on zilvia do not work in explorer, but work fine in chrome.

give it a shot.

Since you asked for feedback

The commercial seemed to lack focus. Are you advertising the barbershop or the butter?

The commercial gives no information on what the benefits of the product are.

I presume you are advertising the cream based on the video name. The product does not appear a lot in the commercial if you are.

If you are advertising both I think you would need to show more of the product and the shop itself. Maybe a slo mo shot of people walking into the shop with the sign clearly visible.

Preference but the music choice (royalty free I presume) is a bit grating.

I have not done it professionally but I have a degree in marketing.

I shoot 3x commercial white black and Hispanic. when all 3 are done I will combine them and do a voice-over also i am going to re edit the video .