240 art feedback please

[jedidiah0891]

Just finished some new 240 pics and want some feedback.
http://www.forever420.com/contents/images/blues13hatch.jpg
http://www.forever420.com/contents/images/s14bdrift.jpg
T-shirt available at my project240 fund raising site if anyone is interested.

[p11driver]

thats pretty tight. i like the s13 headlights

[ThatGuy]

Unmold the bumpers and skirts on the S13 and it will look alot better, IMO. Maybe some different wheels too.

[katbak]

^^ true, I'd go with 7 or 5 spoke, thats tight shit tho nice job.

[O-Mikey]

man, those are mad, nice work!

[exitspeed]

Wow, pretty nice. I wish I could do art on photoshop. Is this topic open to other people's 240 art?

[Biggamehit]

good looking shit only thing missing is nice ass D1 style wing

can u do skylines

[prophet_19]

http://www.forever420.com/contents/images/s14bdrift.jpg

lokos good but here are a few suggestions
give the hood some detail, give the window a shine look, create a "in motion" look.

[jedidiah0891]

Thank you all for the feedback. Ill work on everything you said, and i'll do a skyline on thursday or friday. And yes this topic is open to other peoples 240 art.

[jedidiah0891]

Updated versions from your suggestions
http://www.forever420.com/contents/images/blues13hatch.jpg
http://www.forever420.com/contents/images/s14bdrift.jpg

[ThatGuy]

S14 look a little better, S13 looks the same.

[SilviaDriver]

s14a and s14b? you got them mixed up. its the other away around.

[01SaturnL200]

how much are shirts? do u do diff colors?

[SlideStar]

The s13 is sweet but i think it needs 5spoke rims or something.

otherwise. nice work

[jedidiah0891]

2001saturnL200 If you want to know what shirts I have and how much just check out my web site click on my signature.

silviaDriver What do you mean I have them mixed up? My car is a 96 s14a 97 -98 would be s14b. Why would it be the other way around? Why would b come before a that's just alphabetically incorrect.

[ThatGuy]

It's not alphabetical, it's Before minor change, After minor change.

[01SaturnL200]

do u have any of a FB driftin?

[s14unimog]

do a drifting picture of the zenki in your signature.. also show more of the side of the s14...thats my 2 cents

[jedidiah0891]

That guy
Oh well mayby I'm wrong I can admit that. I never really liked the 97-98 so I guess I just did'nt research it properly. Oh well shit happens I'm stuck with it now.

01SaturnL200
Pardon my ignorance but fb?
I know what an fd is. But I don't know what an fb is.

As for all these numbers and letter I say screw um all im just gonna change my site name to prettycar.com but shit thats probably taken or mayby s14aasinalphabetically.com but thats way to long so i'll just stick with s14a and look stupid. :duh:

[YellwMonky]

It's not alphabetical, it's Before minor change, After minor change.

hahahahhah...are you serious?

95-96 = s14
97-98 = s14a

[s14 blacktop]

Hey nice work, I have a couple of suggestions from an artist to another look at your wheels real close and you will notice that they are a off the one in the front is more of a circle rather than oval the one in the back is a better wheel profile that you would want to blow up and put in the front unless you ment for the car to look like its making a left turn!

[boosted_240]

Not bad what program did you use?

[chokudoriS13]

hahahahhah...are you serious?

95-96 = s14
97-98 = s14a


He is right though, you know... A stands for "after minor change"... Thus, sometimes they are also called S14m/c. Logically, if its an S14 "before minor change," it becomes an S14b. :D.

[ThatGuy]

hahahahhah...are you serious?

:squint: Yes I am. :fawk:

[Andrew Bohan]

wow, calling them s14b and s14a is sooooo 2002. :ghey:
everyone who's anyone calls them zenki and kouki now :wiggle: