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groundzero
11-11-2001, 03:44 PM
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Give me a feedback I want to know what you think.

BlankFlip
11-11-2001, 03:53 PM
it sux

actually, i couldn't get it to work, it kept timing out or whatever.

rubbersidedown
11-11-2001, 04:16 PM
i don't like rap or hip hop AT ALL. i hate it. and i wish the #### rappers would stop trying to move in on the techno seen. its pisses me off. but that's beside the point. i like the music and the beat and the lyrics aren't bad, but you lack expression in your voice. the track doesn't start off so bad but other than that singer sounds so monotonous. so yeah. all i gotta say is use more expression in your voice. or something like that, there is a better way i could put that but i can't think of it at the moment. you should try and do the track over and post it again. i'd like to hear how it turns out.

chickenmanq
11-11-2001, 04:30 PM
Hey, this is the infamous D21 owner. &nbsp;I dig it. &nbsp;I listen to pretty much all music though. &nbsp;Even country, ocasionally. &nbsp;Mostly Megadeth, Ozzy, Propellerheads, Dead Kennedys, etc. &nbsp;Anyway, sounds good. &nbsp;It goes longer than that, right? &nbsp;2<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>5 is too short for techno/rap/hiphop.

chickenmanq
11-11-2001, 04:32 PM
What's the rest sound like, or is this a new album? &nbsp;Oh yeah, I second the more inflection in voice comment.

BlankFlip
11-11-2001, 04:32 PM
i can't get it to work, but i don't really like rap or techno, so i'm sure u wouldn't wanna hear my honest opinion.

chickenmanq
11-11-2001, 04:35 PM
Hey, have you ever heard Thievery Corporation? &nbsp;&quot;Lebanese Blonde&quot; is a particular favorite of mine. &nbsp;I have it on mp3 if you want it.

DuffMan
11-11-2001, 05:16 PM
Your voice is really boring. It like puts me to sleep. I like the track tho.

DuffMan
11-11-2001, 05:17 PM
And the hook is bad

keepitmovin
11-11-2001, 05:29 PM
Hey I liked it. Personally Im a big fan of hip hop. (not to be confused with hip pop). Hey ground maybe we can exchange lyrics sometimes. Im on AIM: movesomthin7
Me and my friend got a little group going its called 3 ov nawledge.

Zexel
11-11-2001, 06:45 PM
mad props dude. &nbsp;I dig it. &nbsp;I&quot;m a big fan of hip hop as well. &nbsp;me and my brother have Acid 2.0, we can make some tight beats on it. &nbsp;all I need is a mic for my computer and I could get some lyrics to it. &nbsp;but, back to the post topic, good job. &nbsp;I like it, if you get more, post 'em. &nbsp; I'd love to hear them. &nbsp;tell me when your album comes out too.

Kid Zelda
11-11-2001, 07:24 PM
Hook needs work....like whatever

The beat is nice, I dig it, you guys flowed well on it

Nice, would like to hear more

11-12-2001, 12:07 AM
first i have to say how can anyone comment on hip hop when someone doesnt listen to it. i mean you may hear your ocasional puffy/ nelly on the radio that doesnt make you a expert. so to say the vocals were weak and needed more expression? second when is rap or hip hop for that matter moving into techno? uhh last time i heard hip hop invented scratching and techno uses that and break beats? so i think you got your story backwards.

as far as to you directly ground. nice no matter what anyone says keep doing music for urself. i myself flowed and made beats but due to time constraints and just the whole seen changing i lost alotta inspiration. who knows anymore........but hopefully i will still be doing it unnaground. keep up the work man. props

LanceS13
11-12-2001, 12:24 AM
honest opinion...
-voice is not as boring as some are making it out to be, but (assuming I had some talent for writing lyrics) I'd do a few things different trying to be more creative.
-music is a bit boring...I am listening through my much-less-than-adequate computer speakers, but the track sounds empty. &nbsp;I kept expecting a build-up that never came. &nbsp;However, the beat is nice and makes a good base...I'd just add/change a few things...you know, the creativity thing. &nbsp;As is, it sounds a bit too manufactured. &nbsp;

...but anyway...I'll respect anything that anybody puts their heart and soul into. &nbsp;Just remember...music is expression...hold nothing back.

rubbersidedown
11-12-2001, 09:30 AM
i have listened to a lot of rap and hip hop and what not and i still do. its not really by choice though, its because a lot of my friends are really into it and so i'm forced to listen to it whenever i'm around them. i have to admit i come across some stuff that i like but in general i hate rap &nbsp;and hip hop and pop, not only because a lot of their music sucks but because of the overall attitude of the artist. and regardless if anyone listens to much rap or not, they can still have an opinion on lyrics, beats, the voice and whateer the #### they feel. because those aspects make any type of music good. and techno has been around before rap. and yes, rappers are moving in on the techno scene. i guess you haven't noticed how a lot of the rappers are moving away from simple beats to use a more complicated electronica feel. umm.. so yeah. heh

groundzero
11-12-2001, 01:49 PM
Its all gravy!!!! &nbsp;I knew that some of you wouldn't like this track, and some of you did. &nbsp;Im just saying I love to make music no matter who says bad things about it...That even makes me more confident on my shit! But for those of you who do like it, Thanks! &nbsp;

11-12-2001, 01:53 PM
i liked it and u've got a great attitude.... thats what counts keep at it, dont let n e one hold ya down.

LanceS13
11-12-2001, 02:06 PM
</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from groundzero on 2:49 pm on Nov. 12, 2001
Its all gravy!!!! I knew that some of you wouldn't like this track, and some of you did. Im just saying I love to make music no matter who says bad things about it...That even makes me more confident on my shit! But for those of you who do like it, Thanks!
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Great attitude, man!...I hate it when people get all riled up when they ask people to give their honest opinion and they actually give it to them. &nbsp;But hey...as long as you enjoy it, screw what everybody else thinks of it.:)

BlankFlip
11-12-2001, 02:09 PM
exactly &quot;screw what everybody else thinks,&quot; everybody is gonna have a different style or taste. just like in music, i hate when i play a cd i love then somebody that like a different type of music thinks it sux, u just gotta ignore stuff like that.

groundzero
11-12-2001, 08:17 PM
Thanks for understanding me Blank and Lance. &nbsp;I can't do anything but to keep doing what im doing. &nbsp;I'm going to post every track I finish... There might be one song everyone would like... I can see it.

11-12-2001, 10:54 PM
</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from rubbersidedown on 9:30 am on Nov. 12, 2001
i have listened to a lot of rap and hip hop and what not and i still do. its not really by choice though, its because a lot of my friends are really into it and so i'm forced to listen to it whenever i'm around them. i have to admit i come across some stuff that i like but in general i hate rap and hip hop and pop, not only because a lot of their music sucks but because of the overall attitude of the artist. and regardless if anyone listens to much rap or not, they can still have an opinion on lyrics, beats, the voice and whateer the #### they feel. because those aspects make any type of music good. and techno has been around before rap. and yes, rappers are moving in on the techno scene. i guess you haven't noticed how a lot of the rappers are moving away from simple beats to use a more complicated electronica feel. umm.. so yeah. heh
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two words for you afrika bambata! ohh and most of the ol school break beats were fast. how do i know i use to break myself.


and yeah groundzero keep doin it for yourself.

misnomer
11-13-2001, 12:47 AM
Well, you're never going to impress everyone. I didn't care for it, it's just not my style. The voice is a bit monotonous, and the beat never changes. You sure can talk fast though <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

Like everybody's sayin' though, don't listen to me, I'm just an ####### who listens to and performs Rock and Country <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'> You do your thing, I'll do mine <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'>

S13Grl
11-13-2001, 06:26 PM
Hey, not bad at all. I'm not too big of a fan of hip hop, I'm more of an alternative person, but this sounds cool. &nbsp;Good job!!!!!!
(and yeah, you sure can talk fast).

groundzero
11-13-2001, 08:01 PM
</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Quote: from S13Grl on 6:26 pm on Nov. 13, 2001
Hey, not bad at all. I'm not too big of a fan of hip hop, I'm more of an alternative person, but this sounds cool. Good job!!!!!!
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thanks!

I'll hit you up with some more info on my album...