need comments and suggestions for my tech writing class

[Bbandit]

i did the installation last friday.. since then, i've been working on my paper for my technical writing class.. its due tommorrow..
feel free to point out any mistakes i made (such as grammar, spelling, etc)

btw, its an instruction for how to install cusco tension bar.
i chosed this because its pretty straight forward :D

i will consider any input/comments as a help
so dont worry :cool:

TIA

http://www.conetoy.com/installs/tensionbar/tensionbarinstall.html

PS. excuse my inabilities to write, considering im an international student.. i always have a hard time writing in good english

[Bbandit]

never mind.. i printed them already.. :(

[fastpace]

damn man. that is really good. you shouldn't have any problems with getting a good grade.:D

[Dousan_PG]

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nice writeup btw

[Bbandit]

hopefully.. i need a good grade on this class.. so far.. B average.. i really want an A though.. :(

[negular]

I want to get A's too, but its kinda hard when you dont go to school. ;) :D