V-Way - Put My Dunks On

[J90lude]

This is my first single off my "Dope Sauce Vol. 1 Mixtape".
I'm a underground rapper trying to come up, so tell me what you think!
Btw this song is almost a year old now..
PUT MY DUNKS ON.mp3 (http://www.mediafire.com/?jzyjmwzzkmw)

Its V-Way!! Twitter.com/VWay87 on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads (http://www.myspace.com/vway87)

[BustedS13]

in before Zilvia Fashionista Crew. they gon' be maaaaaaad you're not rapping about something with a vulcanized sole.

sounds like you have talent, i don't know what else to say. sounds like what's popular today, which isn't my bag.

[J90lude]

in before Zilvia Fashionista Crew. they gon' be maaaaaaad you're not rapping about something with a vulcanized sole.

haha :keke:

[dOMEmE]

i dig it.......keep it up...

[J90lude]

in before Zilvia Fashionista Crew. they gon' be maaaaaaad you're not rapping about something with a vulcanized sole.

sounds like you have talent, i don't know what else to say. sounds like what's popular today, which isn't my bag.

Good look but dont worry I got a special Import song coming out btw :2f2f:

[ericcastro]

Unless you can beat S13TEDDY with his sweet drift/import song..............

[J90lude]

Unless you can beat S13TEDDY with his sweet drift/import song..............

I haven't even heard it, but my song will be on point tho..

[dOMEmE]

Unless you can beat S13TEDDY with his sweet drift/import song..............

where is teddy's song at?

[BustedS13]

it's not that poppin' in my s13 or whatever the fuck song, is it? does ANYBODY have that jam?

edit: FOUND IT. FUNNIEST FUCKING THING EVER. FOR THE LULZ.

3ufWGbZ-nXc

[jekai]

kids these days.... /shakes head

[ESmorz]

You need to find someone to get you through the hooks.

Keep it up, live the dream, more hot pockets.

[ericcastro]

where is teddy's song at?
the link on his myspace dont work :(

MySpace - Teddy - 69 - Male - Torrance, Ile-de-France - myspace.com/teddydanh (http://www.myspace.com/teddydanh)

[J90lude]

the link on his myspace dont work :(

MySpace - Teddy - 69 - Male - Torrance, Ile-de-France - myspace.com/teddydanh (http://www.myspace.com/teddydanh)

The link does work!!

[Bubbles]

If it's anything like the background music I expect big things.


wank wank.

[AE_Racer]

s13 song is the bsnz

op sounds good bro keep it up

[wh0aitznic0]

*insert facepalm picture*

Ff89B8YmTJo (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ff89B8YmTJo&feature=related)

[Bubbles]

Dick so big....you can see me coming(sp)


Awesome.


Team on the inside, haters on the outside.

[wh0aitznic0]

It's sad that my gf said the kid with the green hat looks like me.

[dOMEmE]

LOL...his V-TaK hits hard!

[HyperTek]

yo man spit some original shit, your gonna have to stand out more than that.

[exitspeed]

I haven't listened to the song, but i can tell you that just by the name of the song, it doesn't interest me at all. Of course the reason is because I'm 30 and grew up listening to a better generation of hip hop. All these songs about SUCH materialistic things all sound the same to me. It's just a gimmic and there's no content.

Again, I haven't listened to the song so I could be way off.

What happened to hip hop where people were actually saying something? Something about their insecurities, their dreams instead of acting like they have already achieved something because you can afford some shoes. Songs about girls that were actually respectful. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed 2 Live Crew, Too Short, and Akinyele as much as the next guy, but there was also songs like Passing Me By and Hey Lover that said it some much more maturely.

/monday morning old guy rant

[murda-c]

Is this like my adidas?

[exitspeed]

Is this like my adidas?

Or Air Force Ones...

[ThatGuy]

Jeeze, this sounds just awful to me.


Just being honest.

[iROYAL]

What happened to hip hop where people were actually saying something? Something about their insecurities, their dreams instead of acting like they have already achieved something because you can afford some shoes. Songs about girls that were actually respectful. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed 2 Live Crew, Too Short, and Akinyele as much as the next guy, but there was also songs like Passing Me By and Hey Lover that said it some much more maturely.

/monday morning old guy rant

It's because people these day try to prove ones glory in materialistic items. Judging by your list, I can say you didn't miss much.

[CONES]

Not bad, but Wale is gonna be holdin it down in DMV for a while

[1on1]

jdm PAINT JOB!!

[DataXUnknown]

ROFL omg lolololol I cannot stop laughing at the pumpin in mah s13333333 and the jdm paint job im like crying im laughing so much. Teddy's link didn't work for me, unless thats him singing that song on his myspace that sounds like little kids singing about taking a shit and jerking and dropping

and to the OP, it's alright I understand your new to the game but thats not something you want to say in your song. Also, like someone else said, your going to have to be more original.

[Phlip]

jdm PAINT JOB!!

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i235/Neil_85/Gifs/everybodyfacepalm.gif

Now I know I have no reason to listen to either of these songs.

[ericcastro]

ROFL omg lolololol I cannot stop laughing at the pumpin in mah s13333333 and the jdm paint job im like crying im laughing so much. Teddy's link didn't work for me, unless thats him singing that song on his myspace that sounds like little kids singing about taking a shit and jerking and dropping

and to the OP, it's alright I understand your new to the game but thats not something you want to say in your song. Also, like someone else said, your going to have to be more original.

Teddys link doesnt work.
I think we need to message him.
His song is awesome, cause he was just bored and did it for kicks, and its just funny, yet awesome.
I used to make him play it when we would all be drunk :)

[Mi Beardo es Loco]

not bad

wish me and the boys were still together. This was us a little back in the day
All Corners on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads (http://www.myspace.com/allcorners)

[J90lude]

I haven't listened to the song, but i can tell you that just by the name of the song, it doesn't interest me at all. Of course the reason is because I'm 30 and grew up listening to a better generation of hip hop. All these songs about SUCH materialistic things all sound the same to me. It's just a gimmic and there's no content.

Again, I haven't listened to the song so I could be way off.

What happened to hip hop where people were actually saying something? Something about their insecurities, their dreams instead of acting like they have already achieved something because you can afford some shoes. Songs about girls that were actually respectful. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed 2 Live Crew, Too Short, and Akinyele as much as the next guy, but there was also songs like Passing Me By and Hey Lover that said it some much more maturely.

/monday morning old guy rant

Im not rapping about Dunks through out the whole song. I understand where your coming from and I agree but V-Way spits facts and truth not just material things. Every now and then majority rappers will rap about material things. By the way I got alot more in store!

[ericcastro]

Im not rapping about Dunks through out the whole song. I understand where your coming from and I agree but V-Way spits facts and truth not just material things. Every now and then majority rappers will rap about material things. By the way I got alot more in store!

Hey, as long as your enjoying your life and not ruining anyone elses.

As far as "oldSchool" being better hip hop. Or I would say mid 90's rap.
Read this article. Kinda true, kinda not, but good for a laugh.

#116 Black Music that Black People Don’t Listen to Anymore « Stuff White People Like (http://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/2008/11/18/116-black-music-that-black-people-dont-listen-to-anymore/)

"............
If you are good at concealing laughter and contempt, you should ask a white person about “Real Hip Hop.” They will quickly tell you about how they don’t listen to “Commercial Hip Hop” (aka music that black people actually enjoy), and that they much prefer “Classic Hip Hop.”
“I don’t listen to that commercial stuff. I’m more into the Real Hip Hop, you know? KRS One, Del Tha Funkee Homosapien, De La Soul, Wu Tang, you know, The Old School.”
Calling this style of music ‘old school’ is considered an especially apt name since the majority of people who listen to it did so while attending old schools such as Dartmouth, Bard, and Williams College."

the site is pure comedy.
one of my favorite BLOG's
Stuff White People Like (http://stuffwhitepeoplelike.com/)

sorry for the thread jack ;)

[BustedS13]

"Every few a months, a white person will put on some Jazz and pour themselves a glass of wine or scotch and tell themselves how nice it is. Then they will get bored and watch television or write emails to other white people about how nice it was to listen to Jazz at home. “Last night, I poured myself a glass of Shiraz and put Charlie Parker on the Bose. It was so relaxing, I wish I had a fireplace.” Listing this activity as one of your favorites is a sure fire way to make progress towards a romantic relationship with a white person."

lol @ "on the Bose"

edit: this article speaks to me, i actually have my Wu Tang shirt on right now.

[Bubbles]

That site is racist on so many levels.

[HyperTek]

See if you can get some original beats though, maybe collab with someone and go from there.. the beats you used, people gonna compare you to the originals. Like the dudes on this forum instantly cut it off because it sounds like some guy rapping over these club songs. Wont be hard to find someone to hook you up with a beat if you dont know how. [url=http://www.futureproducers.com/forums/]FutureProducers.com - musicians learning from musicians[/url

Im trying to put something together myself, produce my own beats b4 i spit on it. I got friends who want me to help them put their stuff together but Im not interested because they usually want to sound like so and so and use so and so beat.

[ericcastro]

That site is racist on so many levels.
lol.
Its only racist against the people called hipsters.
I love the sunglasses article, lol.

[exitspeed]

Ok I gave a listen last night.

Now I realize this is an "underground" mixtape but the quality of it was really poor. Your voice especially was very raspy. And not in a Ja-Rule, DMX way. Like the quality of the music was low or something. I don't know jack shit about making music, just telling you what I hear.

I don't care for your flow either. It's too choppy, but like unintentionally. I also didn't hear anything that caught my attention. The metaphors and word play just didn't do it for me. Honestly it sounds like the same Solider Boy style I hear on the radio constantly...the stuff that makes me change the station.

But I'm just a dude on a car forum, so don't let me ruin your day or anything. Like Eric said, if you ain't hurtin anybody do what you wanna do.

[J90lude]

Ok I gave a listen last night.

Now I realize this is an "underground" mixtape but the quality of it was really poor. Your voice especially was very raspy. And not in a Ja-Rule, DMX way. Like the quality of the music was low or something. I don't know jack shit about making music, just telling you what I hear.

I don't care for your flow either. It's too choppy, but like unintentionally. I also didn't hear anything that caught my attention. The metaphors and word play just didn't do it for me. Honestly it sounds like the same Solider Boy style I hear on the radio constantly...the stuff that makes me change the station.

But I'm just a dude on a car forum, so don't let me ruin your day or anything. Like Eric said, if you ain't hurtin anybody do what you wanna do.



At least your honest and I didnt noticed the quality was low on the 2nd hook but best believe I got more in store. Besides that song is like a year old!

[J90lude]

See if you can get some original beats though, maybe collab with someone and go from there.. the beats you used, people gonna compare you to the originals. Like the dudes on this forum instantly cut it off because it sounds like some guy rapping over these club songs. Wont be hard to find someone to hook you up with a beat if you dont know how. [url=http://www.futureproducers.com/forums/]FutureProducers.com - musicians learning from musicians[/url

Im trying to put something together myself, produce my own beats b4 i spit on it. I got friends who want me to help them put their stuff together but Im not interested because they usually want to sound like so and so and use so and so beat.

Ok! This song is almost a year old and have plenty of other songs that are decent and have custom beats.

[J90lude]

[QUOTE=exitspeed;3232139]Ok I gave a listen last night.

I don't care for your flow either. It's too choppy, but like unintentionally. I also didn't hear anything that caught my attention. The metaphors and word play just didn't do it for me. Honestly it sounds like the same Solider Boy style I hear on the radio constantly...the stuff that makes me change the station.

Another thing my flow is nothing like a solider boy style!:squint:

[Future240]

^Edit Post Button?

As a person who listens to everything from Wu-tang to Nas, to ICP to Jeezy I must say this is a nice try but honestly you need work. Your flow was non-existent, much to choppy as Exitspeed said. Your lyrics could use an overhauling. Just having great lyrics would make you stand out more as a rapper since a lot of the stuff on the airwaves is simple minded. (Not saying you are)

As far as beat, I would hope that you have sampled some better ones like Jay Z for instance.

You mentioned several times you have more songs, so post so then. Let us see more examples of your talent. If you are trying to break into the rap game then I understand your subject matter, to quote Jeezy They want that young shit, that dumb shit, that where you from shit

So give them what they want, but mix in some higher level stuff and be lyrical the entire time.