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mkomar24
05-16-2009, 04:48 PM
I had some footage from our last event in STL and I made a short video that cuts between three camera angles. There is no spots left out I just randomly selected different angles to be shown at different times so its the whole run. Im kind of new to the track thing so I would love any input on what a better line would be or where I could add speed angle whatever. Its an S13 with blacktop SR 13psi, exhaust intake, JIC coilovers, and 16 inch tires. Any input would be awesome!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urTOGNcmXU4&feature=channel_page
n_my_coupe
05-17-2009, 04:37 AM
keep it up man ....i cant say much i just started driving at adams kart track
jussjepbrox
05-17-2009, 05:00 AM
YOUR KILLIN IT. good job get outside shots also
Felipe
05-17-2009, 05:21 AM
how many runs did that take to make?
mkomar24
05-17-2009, 11:41 AM
Actually this video was three individual runs one with each camera mount. Two mounts outside, one inside. The runs were all the same line with little variation so I could just cut between the three angles to try and show the best shot of each turn. I dont know much about editing so mabe this wasnt the best way to show it but it does show each corner, transition, and the only part that overlaps is where it shows an outside manji view looking back and then the inside manji view right near the end. Other than that it should show the whole course from start to end. Right at the end of the last two turns you can hear me get off the throttle as the car just keeps sliding and losing speed. Any advice on how to keep in the throttle but not fly off the edge of the track?
Sexy_Ninja
05-17-2009, 07:21 PM
omar. u da shit.
Team DET
05-17-2009, 08:16 PM
i like good job
RMerritts
05-18-2009, 09:09 AM
Think i saw this over at the STL forums, not bad man, keep practicin youll get better.
JDMslide180
05-18-2009, 09:14 PM
good shit bro... keep it up^^^
WagDatto
05-19-2009, 12:46 PM
Needs more rev-limiter! Haha, just kidding, clean run! I'm definitely feeling it!

Best editing would be 3 views from ONE run, so when you cut to a different view, you can match it up so it's completely seamless as far as noise. It threw me off when you started the run and switched to outside view and the rev was way off.
haggard240
05-19-2009, 01:14 PM
you didn't spin out.. soo give it a :bigok:
J ROK
05-19-2009, 01:26 PM
How can we critique the best of 3 diff. runs? It would make sense to watch all 3 runs.

Good driving and nice track though.
s142jzkillav10
05-19-2009, 08:34 PM
Looks like some good runs too me. ++
mkomar24
05-19-2009, 10:04 PM
Thanks yeah they are all basically the same but I will see if I can get just one up. I have this one which was a little easier, I didnt try to connect the manji section at the end but its almost the same run basically. As the day went on I tried going faster and connecting everything.

YouTube - omar single rearview perfect hairpin (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dB4mmY6LDbs)