Help make my ad better

[The_Reaper]

what else would you add or change or even remove from my ad. i know its priced very fairly for i have checked autotrader, cars.com, and others. any input would be a big help. Tks

2006 Black Range Rover Sport Hse, Loaded, Rims, dvd players best deal. (http://seattle.craigslist.org/see/cto/914287489.html)

[HyperTek]

that thing is ballin dude i think ur ad looks fine
is that really urs? for a 20year old

[The_Reaper]

ya it is, i worked my ass off to get. my brother has his own company so i work for him and he pays me well. my i paid it off like 2 months ago but now need money for house.

[touge monster]

"The Grill costs more the some people cars so you will not see this car everywhere."

- misspelled word.


I would also edit my address and license plate..


other than that, you have a ballin car. GLWS