Check out our site and give your critique

[chokudoriS13]

The site has been in the works for a while now, and is finally up, going through testing stages. Not everything is operational, but will be soon. It will be geared to the drift/touge coverage crowd, and we will be featuring a couple of S13 build-ups. It's not a commercial site, but just a hobby. So, take a quick look if you have time, and if you like it/dislike it, post and explain why. Also post any bugs you may find.

Also, I wrote the first feature, so critique that and let me know what you think of the writing style. It was done in a hurry, so let me know what you'd change.

http://www.dori-spot.com

Thanks,
Vadim

[DSC]

Well, there's not really anything there yet...but for the look i'd say it's great. Did you take the pic used on the main page and for the header on the rest of the pages? Just wondering...
As for the 1st feature, umm well written, you don't want me to comment further.

Wish I could design a site that looks like that...

[Apparition]

That is one wicked splash screen. Should make that a wallpaper without the "Enter".

Otherwise, the dark red text on red is hard to read. I need something with a little more constrast. Otherwise, lookin' good.

[gregsr20]

no complaints, i even learned a little

[Zemus]

Ill give you a truthful raiting, i do websites for a living partaly and im going to school for it, so ill give you my personal oppinon.
-When going to the enter site i was imedietly draw to the site, i hit enter
-When entering the site i was pleased with the simpless of it all, and it was detailed enought to keep my attention.
-The content is minimal but im sure it will grow in time, im very impressed with the site itself.

I only have one recomendation, use PHP much faster and much easyer :-D

[240Dori]

looks good....there arent many drift specific sites like that...hurry up and get the forums set up i will definitely join...good luck man cant wait to see what happens

[Bbandit]

great layout...
i like it.. simple and easy to navigate
i have to agree with oni
use php... its faster
keep up the good work...
when its done.. i might join your forum.. LOL

[midnights14]

hey bbandit!

DUDE! Get that stud fixed, seriously, because I had mine like that for a month, and while I was on the road, two more of my studs fell off....scariest **** in the world...:)

I would suggest gettin it fixed, trust me.

[crioten]

i like the splash screen, it kicks @$$. good job :)


glen

[masta]

That is real nice so far. I can not wait until more content goes up there as well as the forum.

I am looking forward to learning a lot about drifting and have already set this in my favorites.

[chokudoriS13]

Thanks, keep 'em coming. I'm not doing the web programming part, so I'll just send this link to my friend in charge of it, and have him look at the reviews. The page loads slow for you guys? Weird... Even on 56k it loaded fast, with the only slow part being the opening splash page...hmmm.

Once again, thanks,
Vadim

[coolerow2]

LMAO, i recognize that 86 in your site. You know Sekai? Wat a fewl. I should beat-up Sekai just for trying to spread his boro-ness!

[chokudoriS13]

heh, yeah, Sekai is my buddy Hiko's friend.

Originally posted by coolerow2
LMAO, i recognize that 86 in your site. You know Sekai? Wat a fewl. I should beat-up Sekai just for trying to spread his boro-ness!

[brage]

MAke sure to specify the sizes of your images in your HTML. This will allow your pages to draw faster and the images won't look funky when loading. otherwise the site design looks great.

-jeff

IE specify both the width and height :) not just one or the other

or was this look intentional?

[Ryan of Velocity]

Looks good. My only suggestion is to use a dark grey text instead of the red. Other than that looks good, really dug the splash screen.

[midnights14]

I digressed earlier from the topic (I do that a lot :) ), but I checked out the site and I must say that I love it! The only thing I would change is the lettering; you should make it a little brighter.

[Got Sileighty?]

woohoo!! someone finally got around to writing the feature article. too bad its the end of january already....meaning, its time for another one! haha.

[chokudoriS13]

Originally posted by Got Sileighty?
woohoo!! someone finally got around to writing the feature article. too bad its the end of january already....meaning, its time for another one! haha.

hah! I can bust 'em out in seconds :D. The quality, however, is a different story...

[Bbandit]

Originally posted by midnights14
hey bbandit!

DUDE! Get that stud fixed, seriously, because I had mine like that for a month, and while I was on the road, two more of my studs fell off....scariest **** in the world...:)

I would suggest gettin it fixed, trust me.

LOL!
yea i know.. im not driving my car anyway.. atleast until i got it fixed.. prolly tommorrow

[phastlane]

I only went cuz I find you sig humorous,
j/k, looks good so far

[blaqsilvia]

hmmmm. not working :eek: :(

[chokudoriS13]

Try it again, it should work.

either:

http://www.dori-spot.com

or

http://www.dorispot.com

Both work.