Poetry thread. Post your lyrics here. ALL WELCOME.

[downshift_sideways]

:snoop: Poetry Thread. Post up any poems/songs here!:snoop:
Do you have a poem/song that you've written and would like to share?
Here is the place! Please feel free to post WHATEVER. I personally like to rhyme about politics and what goes on in the world and the streets.

Rules:
#1. Please stay on topic. No outside discussion. However if you are talking about someone's post. That's fine. No outside car talk/Rappers bullshit.Thx.

#2. Please don't disrespect anyone poetry. Everyone has their own style and outlook on life which recoils into their lyrics.

#3. Please blank out any racial slurr or terminolgy.

#4. Please post at your own risk. There are a lot of people who "steal' lyrics and beats.


:kiss:So here we go!! Post em up!:kiss:

[ALTRNTV]

Don't wanna post my songs yet, but here's some quotes
and short-pieces I came up with ya heard? If you see these
somewhere else, they stole it from me. ;)

"She's the perfect verse to my beat, and the perfect
note to my music".

"A walk so mean to go with a perfect frame, she makes
dimepieces look like loose change".

"I write my own story, I sing my own song, I rap my own
rhyme, and I always right my own wrong, so don't judge me
from what you hear and see, because you know absolutely
nothing about me".

"No girls, no problems,
Know girls, know problems".

"I'm tryin' to do everything to move up a level in your heart,
but I can't make the move, until you press start".

[downshift_sideways]

I wrote this for my fallen homie. "Crazy Eyes"

Dear lord please help me. Why'd you take him away.
Heard the news, N*ggas shot him and now he's dead in the grave.
I remember kicking back, drinking 40's and blaze, we rode to the fullest,
I showed you how to stack your chips in the game,we stayed out night.
Jacking cars. We was trying to get paid.
I never thought this shit would happen when we stepped in the scene.
I'm still thinking can this be true? Nah it must be a dream.
I can't stand to see the tears in my homie John in his eyes.
Because if you Bleed. Then we bleed. why did you have to die?
You will always be remembered, I'm still hurting inside.
I'd give you my lastbreathe so you can be alive.
tear drops on my face but I'm still ready to ride. and about it...It's hell on earth now...because this is when thugs cry.

The gates to hell lets loose in the streets.....when thugs cry.
We going about it saying 'fuck the police'....when thugs cry.
fallen angels...Please pick up his soul...
My N*gga crazy eyes we miss you why did you have to go.
x2


I remember all those times that yo N*gga had fought. You would always had a N*ggas back.
Ready to go. and now some n*gga took my boy away.
I'm seeing a spirit like an angel, go on outget out and fly away.
Them bitch n*gga's are gonna have to pay.
I'm going back to killing more so these n*gga's know they better back away.
There aint no way I'm letting this shit slide.
I know I promised God no more violence....but god damnit I can't stay silent.
I know I changed but F*CK THAT this shit is burning inside.
I'm packing bullets, Reminiscing while holding a clip with my 9.
My homie crazy eyes this one's for you. you'll never be forgotten till the end of my time.



The gates to hell lets loose in the streets.....when thugs cry.
We going about it saying 'fuck the police'....when thugs cry.
fallen angels...Please pick up his soul...
My n*gga crazy eyes we miss you why did you have to go.
x2

*R.I.P Homie. I caught em on the flip already. I know you looking down on me*

[stiizy]

The more the bread, nicka the hotter the flow,yo the better the head,nicka the hotter the hoe,
the more liquor, yo the better the flow,

lil sample i got tracks at the crib i'll upload when i get outta work

[exitspeed]

ALSO PLEASE be aware of words that you can and cannot use here on Zilvia. Not trying to censor people too much, but we do have rules. :)

Now spit that shit.

[stiizy]

thats why it's so hard for me to post up but back on topic lets do this

[downshift_sideways]

My bads. I'll reinforce the rules. thanks Mel.

[HyperTek]

another sleepless night in my bedroom im doomed, thoughts of passion that never blooms in my room.

i got a rhymebook at home ill grab some stuff i dont care a bout and post it.

remind people might not wanna post some stuff incase someone copys it as thier own. ( seen this happen on futureproducers.com where people have posted thier beats and have some steal em as thier own)

[Antihero983]

I've written over 200 songs, most of which i keep in a notebook, and all of which are copyrighted, so HANDS OFF.

all lyrics are copyright 2008 Jellyfish Schoolyard Music.


here's one from earlier this year...

*Bleeding Through Consequence* (noemolol)

As the truth burns down the world around me
I see your porclain eyes crack
you begin to fear that which you cannot understand
this whole time
you swore it was real
you swore it was never going to hurt
the blind fall the hardest

we're bleeding through the consequences
your actions brought this on
your ignorance was the ignition
watch as it all burns around you
wallow in its ashes

As I stand amongst the rubble
of all your hope and illusions
I see the regret pour from your veins
its too late to forgive
its too late to forget
porclain eyes will shatter
under the strain of the truth

we're bleeding through the consequences
your actions brought this on
your ignorance was the ignition
watch as it all burns around you
wallow in its ashes

your pleas
will go unasnwered
your cries
will go unheard
your existence
will be forgotten
your lies
will bury us all

we're bleeding through the consequences
your actions brought this on
your ignorance was the ignition
watch as it all burns around you
wallow in its ashes

[stiizy]

had a chick holla at me , come over and get at me, asked what she wanna do, she wanna do the nasty,

no time front, can't let this chance pass me, took off her la perla, you could say the shortys classy,

So i layed it down, shorty could sense that i fear her, signals from her body could be more clearer, she was throwing them shits at me like a muth mirror,

I said u bout to get throwed, she said prove it , a real type broad , some i could groove with,

she said c'mon papi, lets start to make this music, she knew she had a real ass n***a, someone she can cruise with,

i put it on her , mami got it good, althrough screaming, papi fuck me like u could,

dropped the chick off, i'm back on to da block Decatur , R8 outside while i wave to all my hataz,
didn't see wife in her but thats what i made her, fucked on the 3rd night, i guess i fuckin slayed her,

We back in the ride pumpin music for love, glasstop roof for viewing stars up above,
could this be it? nah, yo i think i'm love...


Quick one??

What ya think??

[Dirty Habit]

Haiku for today:

Piece of shit car
cranking grinding farting fire
Im gonna sell you and focus on my s130.

[SHIFT_*grind*]

A quick one to describe my current state of affairs:

Sitting at my desk with my nose in this book
I can feel my brain cells starting to cook
The seconds tick by at such a slow pace
If this goes on much longer I'm gonna shoot myself in the face

[stiizy]

^^yo this class shit dude, yo it's all a waste

In this fucking wild world, i'm just trying to paper chase..

All this cash out here, i'm just trying to get a taste,


i'm bored as fuck.............................................. ......................

[Dirty Habit]

Apocolytic appendectamy
faces melting
Useless organs ending it all.

[downshift_sideways]

Quick little freesytle while trying to perfect a beat.

Open your eyes to see.
The world we walk on,live on throw down on.
tell yourself is it really worth it to me?

107 of us die every minute in the world.
While you standing there blind to see.
Face up with your hands curled.
Heat to your sides,
thinking this maybe your last day of ya life.
Accepting the fact that everything you have. Owned. and Lost will be gone foreva.
But your in a state of mind.
Not even hesitating to pull the trigga

*POP POP POP*
You just threw it away.
25 to life
All for this game.
For some of us the street taught us our way.
But it's sad to see.
Another gunned down with an innocent face.
where is humanity?

[C. Senor]

yo you know the name of the game, the fame of my name brings blood tears i see your face stained.
you strained to keep your eyes focused, went blurry with hatred cuz i made it to the top at the bottom you stayed.
i lead the battle, walls torn down and shattered, bloody and beat i made even if i walk with a stagger.
i take pride in my work, my thoughts, and know i'm the baddest. so it's not a stagger, its really my swagger.
i really wanna lay down, shut my eyes and relax.
i got nothing leftl, my mind is about to collapse.
its tired and weiry, but some fresh fuel, just perhaps.
might give the drive needed so i can surpass.
any and every thing that stands in my way.

and that's where i got stuck.

[downshift_sideways]

^sickness.

[stiizy]

That was hot Senor,,,

i got some shit i'ma throw up when i get at home...

[downshift_sideways]

Where's the late night tweeker rhymes at?

[DALAZ_68]

ill drop in something i made bout 4 years ago


pain inside felt deep within
i cant let it go i cant let it be
iv tried, god knows Ive tried
i wake up and its there, haunting
teasing, laughing as i fall

its taken over before, i feared it would.
stopped caring, stop loving
it felt great, breaking old limits
having nothing hold me back
no tears falling off this face

Scars growing hurting but not focusing
diluted thoughts past my mind
i fall hard but rise again
bruises, scars, drops of blood not tears
the only pain i can understand

After everything, i was saved
a hug from a dear friend saved my soul
the warmth of another's heart who cares
woke me from within, i live anew
born again, rising from the ashes.



and yes i did write this :keke:

[C. Senor]

thanks guys. let's see if i can think of something right now.

it's super late, yet still i wait, to see what comes next
the visions, the sights, leaves my mind some what perplexed.
i'm confused, is it good, is it bad, in the middle, i dont know.
the river runs dry, so how is it i flow?
floatin on raft, with no water and a small draft.
the wind speaks the truths, the secrets, and some laughs.
it's sad, it's happy, its both ying and yang.
understood well, but difficult to explain.
wonders my thoughts, throught the forrests of time.
lost in swamps of my mind, until found....reality is mine.

[ESmorz]

uh uh bust it

Im just a white kid from a small white town.
the going bit seems to be what the fuck do I know about hip hop if I'm not brown
at least I'm not one of those sucka Mc's living off macaroni and cheese

Not from the streets not from the ghetto but Im in your face like Dom Toretto

Put a squirt gun to your face and pull the trigger
easy shmeezy lemon squeezy
grew up in a house hold where I was told to eat my pea's
fuck all the haters my mom and pops is the bee's knees

cheah

[Z33dori]

I tend to wright when i'm pissed off, or feeling depressed....

"Stop all the fucking lies

stop all the fucking bullshit

learn to be real

be real to yourself

be real to the ones you love

don't change for someone else

only change for yourself...

fuck the haters

and fuck the instigators

look at yourself and learn to be smart

speak the words in your heart

and not the words in your head

don't fall victim to society's down fall

step up and fly

take a dive into a reality

be true

be real

and tell the world

TO FUCK OFF"

------------------

[stiizy]

i'm at work like a psychosomatic, got a money problem, you can call me a franklin addict,

flow sicker than AIDS with a host name Magic, if ya stacks to low, you call that shit tragic,

stacks cling together son like that shit had static, i guess u can say i'm at my own platinum status,

in high school always had chicks who the baddest, had a dominican chick by the name of Gladys, epitome of what a perfect ass is..

But back to the block, where the cops wanna hassle, swing my 40's all around like them shits was tassels.

stay up on the grind, stay on my hustle, dreams in my mind, g-packs coming in straight from fucking Brussels,

Dudes flexing tough, Nicka are you serious, beat that ass down, now he done being curious,

all in my biz, you done fucked up, i aint fucking beat, i aint getting stuck up...


god i'm bored as hell

[C. Senor]

will you all you all look at my boy stiizy,
saying he bored but the question stands, is he?
i dont know man, but he be getting the cheddah.
saying he used to get girls, but now quicker the dick gettah!
naw i play, nothing but jokes man.
i'm just statin i dont wanna keep seein him choke man.
in seriousness stands the truth that we need something to do.
so i think i'm going to go back to eating my food.

[TiNMAN]

Wesssssside! no T!

[ESmorz]

uh uh bust it

Im just a white kid from a small white town.
the going bit seems to be what the fuck do I know about hip hop if I'm not brown
at least I'm not one of those sucka Mc's living off macaroni and cheese

Not from the streets not from the ghetto but Im in your face like Dom Toretto

Put a squirt gun to your face and pull the trigger
easy shmeezy lemon squeezy
grew up in a house hold where I was told to eat my pea's
fuck all the haters my mom and pops is the bee's knees

cheah

Rofl I don't even remember posting that.

I guess I get gangster when I'm drunk.

:bowrofl::bowrofl:

WEST SIDE SON!

[muddafakka]

Roses and red
Violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
But this one doesn't

:faint:

[ALTRNTV]

Roses are red, violets are black
Why the fuck is your chest, as
flat as your back?

[Dirty Habit]

Cohabitation with a monster.
Place is looking like a pawn store.
Fiends circling like a condor!
And when did you turn into a blonde whore?

To her rehabilitation was demure.
Bitch you sleep on the floor.
Fuck you, your pillow is your Juicy Coutore!
And why dont I have a bolt-lock door?

[juice.def]

I spit that shit
that make your girl bite her lip

like damn this ni**a sexy i want his d**k
but i dont want that trick

Ni**a my cash come first
so before i ask for the a*s imma ask her to pass her purse

u could give me the worst i give a f**k if she hot
i waz raised talk shit get drunk then start :snoop: dukin the cops

[stiizy]

will you all you all look at my boy stiizy,
saying he bored but the question stands, is he?
i dont know man, but he be getting the cheddah.
saying he used to get girls, but now quicker the dick gettah!
naw i play, nothing but jokes man.
i'm just statin i dont wanna keep seein him choke man.
in seriousness stands the truth that we need something to do.
so i think i'm going to go back to eating my food.

Damn Senor why it gotta be all that???


Na all love bro fa sho...

Damn i'm slippin i'll post some hotter shit later on..

Good shit bro..

[lflkajfj12123]

Watching white moon face
The stars never feel anger
Blah, blah, blah, the end

[ESmorz]

I NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER NARC'D ON NOBODY!

Is that your plan Johnny Tran
Blame me for all your mistakes, tell me not to play on your turf
hows about my boy brian spilner puts you in a hole in the earf

Your cousins nice and dolled up in crocodile dundee drag
a twitchy mother fucker looks like he's always on the rag

I got a charger in the garage wanna step to it

I NEVER I NEVER I NEVER NARC'D On Nobody!

Brians over there with sandy blonde hair... oooooeeeeeee

I GOTTA FIND JESSSE BEFORE THEY DO!

I'm all he's got!

My Names Brian O'Conner Im a cop I guess in the end we're all just pretending to be someone we're not

[Mi Beardo es Loco]

Just sit right back and you'll hear a tale,
A tale of a fateful trip
That started from this tropic port
Aboard this tiny ship.

The mate was a mighty sailing man,
The skipper brave and sure.
Five passengers set sail that day
For a three hour tour, a three hour tour.

The weather started getting rough,
The tiny ship was tossed,
If not for the courage of the fearless crew
The minnow would be lost, the minnow would be lost.

The ship set ground on the shore of this uncharted desert isle
With Gilligan
The Skipper too,
The millionaire and his wife,
The movie star
The professor and Mary Ann,
Here on Gilligans Isle.


fin

[C. Senor]

Damn Senor why it gotta be all that???


Na all love bro fa sho...

Damn i'm slippin i'll post some hotter shit later on..

Good shit bro..


lol. i was just bored, trying to start a little freestyle over the net on a forum. hahaha

[muddafakka]

Watching white moon face
The stars never feel anger
Blah, blah, blah, the end

Brilliant. :bigok:

[SexPanda]

Drifter's poem:

There once was a man from Nantucket.
Who crashed his s13
And said fuck it
he said "I'll slap on some fenders
a headlight or two
And it'll all be held together
with gorilla glue"


All me baby lol.

[C. Senor]

^lol.

dude i have some whacked out poem about the man from nantucket, and its starts the same way. the best rhyme ever.

[downshift_sideways]

Now you see I've spent so many Tears,
So many years, looking down at myself, why so many fears?
I'm a strong man, never looking back, trying to get to the promise land,
trying to make it to the top, haters can say what they want,
but I aint sweating a single drop, you see
I am the way I am, cuz thats the way my moms raised me,
She taught me not to depend on others, and I always wondered
How she was so strong thoughout the hunger,
She set the example for me, you see?
Even tho we had barely enough money,
she managed to keep food on the table for my sister and me,Gave us immunity,
kept a roof over our heads, So we can grow and see the world,you see?
I owe her my life, for 9 months through the pain she carried me,
Even with my family looking down, she kept her head to the sky,
and now I know why, as a child they all made me cry,
but it didn't kill me, it made me stronger, but why?
felt like a penitentary locked up at night,
no music, so I'd stare out the blinds to the light,
Thinking is life only going to get harder?
Watching my older cousins running away from their mothers and fathers,
I remember the time, I packed my things up, no one even knew,
didn't know where I was going to go, but anywhere from where I grew,
but now I see the road, 22 years deep in the game,
got my head in the right way,
Now I see the struggle I see the pain,
Money makes the world go round, but it aint everything.
Life is all about strive and determination,
You gotta push hard or face ectinction,
This world is corrupt and full of hate,
Our government is really our only fate,
But don't believe all the lies they tell us,okay?
the media hides everything, they make us think their own way.
Be strong make your money, but don't get wrapped up on it,
It's the root of all evil.....

...........this is where I'm at.
I gotta pack another bowl and play some more beats.

[SexPanda]

the country is fucked
everyones down on their luck
my dollars worth less than my sense.
The man will try
to perpetuate the lie
But at least I can still look over the fence.

The grass is greener
on the other side
Or so ive been told before
But the only grass I see
is dead and dry
Over the fence is a hardwood floor

So here I am sitting pretty
While the world is passing me by
One day I hope that eveyone will stop
and take a seat next to I.

Enjoy the free beer
and the finer things in life
because life isnt forever

[svensko]

Don't quit your day jobs. :bowrofl:

[SexPanda]

Don't quit your day jobs. :bowrofl:

lol i just spit that shit out in like 2 seconds. I just like to fit in...:Ownedd:

[C. Senor]

spit out like a baby spits out. lol

damn i thought this thing died.

maybe i'll write something a little later.

[c0rs3+r0s3]

keep your own ideas and please respect others...





this ones kinda old but personal....



^^smiles are being taken for granted^^
i look and smile at all u say.
listen destinctly not to miss a word.
i take in consideration for anything you've heard.
it's a strain to hold back the tears as you tell me these lies.
i thought all the times i was there for you, that you would at least try.
all i did was give u a chance to cut me down
as far as you could to make sure i dont leave the ground.
all the faces that make me smile
are the only thing that keep me walking all these miles.
looking down this road i wish there was a hand to hold
but with what youve showed me
im the only one who can fix why im cold.
my feet are bare and there's glass underneith
all i can do is take one step at a time and know
a few times i will bleed.
they say laugh now and cry later
its easier to smile and temporarily numb the pain,
than set there and tell someone who doesnt care about if your sane.
im goin to keep walkin with this splinter in my side and never turn around
and tell u ill be fine.
ill never ask for your hand next time i fall
you wont see me in tears of frustration,
that you caused all along.
one day ill be in a place where i can say with a smile
im here to stay....
it just took me a while.

[C. Senor]

keep your own ideas and please respect others..

i hope that wasn't towards me. if you read the first page you'd find we're just joking. so calm down poopy pants.

[downshift_sideways]

We all try to get away,
Convince ourselfs that this life, It's all just a game,
But then reality hits us, straight in the face,
And we crumble, loosing our pace, loosing our race,
Loosing our place where we stand, time was all just a chase,
Falling down, but where do we land?
Nothings in a silver platter, this is mind over matter,
Pull yourself up your a soldier,
Bruises on your ego, but follow the plan, time is slippin quicker than sand,
But you can't embrace, slips out your hands, you see?
Paranoia is driving you insane, almost to fame, keep the blood in your veins,
Don't let it flood, me and you, we both bleed the same blood,
Throughout all the struggles we can still overcome, many attempts is better than none,
shows us who we've become,
lets run it.

[spikNspan]

^^^ good shit ant.

[downshift_sideways]

^Word homie.

spit some shit !!!

[stiizy]

I'm currently writing a song called "Shorty's Loca"

Haha

[CrashQueen]

here are 2 poems:


The Boat of the Fisherman Leaves a Wake of Dead Fish



Falling in love happens too fast
One look across the crowded scenery
around the needless faces
above the unbearable weight of Reason
through the guise of Hope's blind omniscience
and love attacks
like a grenadier fisherman
without aim, without necessity
Attacks in an explosion of cool waterfire
disfiguring all the fishes in the pond

Falling out of love happens to slow
Time Stops.
The dust is still in the air and you are the solider in the middle of the black and white, brown trench
Steaming organs pour out like incomplete apologies
You scream for help
Medics with textbook knowledge run to your side
They give you the only medicine they can, euphemistic views of the future
"Don't worry buddy, you'll be fine"
"You'll make it through this war to fight again"
Words
Words heal wounds like weapons cure the weather
Lying in a hospital 500 miles away makes you think that you lived through it
Just another purple badge that lets others know you survived
But the shrapnel tears into your spleen
Bile and blood cocktail swims into your stomach when you try to walk back
try to walk away

Throw that ill-colored heart away and wear that tearing shrapnel as a medal
That piece of iron in your belly will make you more elusive to the Grenadier Fisherman


_____________________________________________

Live At Jittery Joe’s


He sits atop a little stage, guitar
in hand. He sings a sad and lonely song
about a sad relationship that left
him all alone. His voice unsteady, eyes
unblinking, and emotions unchecked. He
has put himself in meditation and is
allowing words to fall out of his mouth.

He does not hear the child cry, or the group
of people talk, or the espresso machine
hum. He is hearing too much already.

He hears the sounds that resonate in dreams
of her. The sound her tears made as they fell.
The sound that her footsteps made as she left
his life for good. The hollow, empty sound
that haunts him, and consoles him, every night.

The song is coming to an end. The room
is now alive. The audience is clapping,
the lights are brighter, and a few people
are standing—but a shadow sits, unmoved,
submerged in thought, and clenching a guitar.

[stiizy]

i hope that wasn't towards me. if you read the first page you'd find we're just joking. so calm down poopy pants.

Word thats my neezy so we can bash each other like that.......


Nice Poems Jenn........

i like the second one!!

[c0rs3+r0s3]

no this wasn't directed toward anybody specific.

lol so im not a poopy pants! ;p

[C. Senor]

lol so im not a poopy pants! ;p

Nope you're still a poopy pants! lol


So many divisions and so many lines.
Sperations, devastation and ill thoughts combined.
Humor and smiles scarce brought to extinxt.
Act without reason not even a second to think.
Care and comfort lost in a storm.
Children and parents alike both mourn.
Saddened and hurt our hearts grow feable with ache.
Our minds grow twisted double helixed and breaks.
A dream wished reality never seen again
The beginning can only come after the end.

[stiizy]

^^ Nice homie!!!

[Jeremiel]

in the days of old
when night were cold
and condoms were not invented,

men stuck socks
upon their cocks
and babies were prevented.

[c0rs3+r0s3]

:rawk:"The beginning can only come after the end."


i like that ;D

[C. Senor]

thanks. that what a racism class will do to you. bore the crap out of you. :keke:

and that one by jeremiel made me lol. haha.

[downshift_sideways]

so I finally picked up a microphone nd started recordin some tracks....here is a couple please comment!

Drake-Best I Ever Had Remix
YouTube - Drake- Best I Ever Had (REMIX) - AntZ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Ssdg93FhK8)

Nelly-Just A Dream Remix
YouTube - Nelly - Just A Dream (REMIX) antZ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Harsc3mm61s)