Baka Sama
06-01-2007, 12:04 AM
So I'm in the process of creating a new "series" for fun. Im still in the developing phase so tell me what you guys think so far. Keep in mind I want this to be an comedy manga, with adult humor. lol
Main character lives on an island in the pacific ocean. He lives with parents and helps run a shop on the shore strip. (He lives on top of the shop) Main character loves to surf and competes with his college team whenever he can. His goal is to someday become world famous. One day while practicing on the other side of the island a mysterious storm wecks the island and destroys his home/shop. His parents are also lost in the storm, believed to be swept away by the tide. Everything he has is lost including his surfing dream. Or is it?! After burrying his parents and making arragements to leave the island to live with his granparents, he goes for a night swim to catch one last wave.
While paddling out, he runs in to Zach. Zach is his ach rivial in his college surfing world. Zach gives his condolences for the death of his parents, but sarcasticly mentions that the only reason hes leaving the island was that he knew he would not win the next surfing competition. Outraged the main character challenges Zach one last time. The battle goes on for hours until they both see the perfect wave forming. Both characters rush the wave and side by side they enter the spiral. The main character manages to cut Zach off and exit first. He laughs in triumph just to realize its no longer night time, but daylight! Not only that but his home island is no longer in view, just a small island in the distance. He and Zach look at each other and then up in the sky.... 2 suns??!
They paddle to the mysterious island and are greeted by a towns people clapping and cheering for them. A group of what seems to be strangly dressed guards esorts them to the king.
~This part is a little fuzzy, but what I got so far is that they are greeted by King Crab Legs. A funny old man that tells them they were transported there at his request through the wave they rode through. He then tells them the orgin of surfing. How in the begining, only royalty could practice this ancient form of combat. Combat???! Yes king crab legs tells them that every 100 years a surfing tournament is head in this land and only royalty is allowed to participate. Instead of fighting on land they battle in the sea, using thier boards to ride the waves. The main character and Zach have no interest in helping out king crab legs until he mentions that the winner of the tournament gets an unimaginable prize and the title of the greatest surfer in the galaxy. Pushed by thoughts of fame and glory they both agree to help! The king then explains the rules of the tournament and how each island in his world may pick a small group of up to 3 fighters to attend each match. Whichever island wins 2/3 of the battels moves on to fight in the next round.~
The king has only a teenage duaghter and he is too old to compete. The king then sends his busty daughter to stay with Zach and the main character back on earth to help them with all the rules of the tournament. (Main chracters love interest)
Long story short... the three go back to earth, reopen the main characters shop, and they all move in together. Working in the shop for money and competing in the tournament. As the story progresses more characters are introduced that help in the tournament and live with the main character...
So... What do you think so far?? opinions?? :D
If i anything is spelled wrong.. its late and im at work lol
Main character lives on an island in the pacific ocean. He lives with parents and helps run a shop on the shore strip. (He lives on top of the shop) Main character loves to surf and competes with his college team whenever he can. His goal is to someday become world famous. One day while practicing on the other side of the island a mysterious storm wecks the island and destroys his home/shop. His parents are also lost in the storm, believed to be swept away by the tide. Everything he has is lost including his surfing dream. Or is it?! After burrying his parents and making arragements to leave the island to live with his granparents, he goes for a night swim to catch one last wave.
While paddling out, he runs in to Zach. Zach is his ach rivial in his college surfing world. Zach gives his condolences for the death of his parents, but sarcasticly mentions that the only reason hes leaving the island was that he knew he would not win the next surfing competition. Outraged the main character challenges Zach one last time. The battle goes on for hours until they both see the perfect wave forming. Both characters rush the wave and side by side they enter the spiral. The main character manages to cut Zach off and exit first. He laughs in triumph just to realize its no longer night time, but daylight! Not only that but his home island is no longer in view, just a small island in the distance. He and Zach look at each other and then up in the sky.... 2 suns??!
They paddle to the mysterious island and are greeted by a towns people clapping and cheering for them. A group of what seems to be strangly dressed guards esorts them to the king.
~This part is a little fuzzy, but what I got so far is that they are greeted by King Crab Legs. A funny old man that tells them they were transported there at his request through the wave they rode through. He then tells them the orgin of surfing. How in the begining, only royalty could practice this ancient form of combat. Combat???! Yes king crab legs tells them that every 100 years a surfing tournament is head in this land and only royalty is allowed to participate. Instead of fighting on land they battle in the sea, using thier boards to ride the waves. The main character and Zach have no interest in helping out king crab legs until he mentions that the winner of the tournament gets an unimaginable prize and the title of the greatest surfer in the galaxy. Pushed by thoughts of fame and glory they both agree to help! The king then explains the rules of the tournament and how each island in his world may pick a small group of up to 3 fighters to attend each match. Whichever island wins 2/3 of the battels moves on to fight in the next round.~
The king has only a teenage duaghter and he is too old to compete. The king then sends his busty daughter to stay with Zach and the main character back on earth to help them with all the rules of the tournament. (Main chracters love interest)
Long story short... the three go back to earth, reopen the main characters shop, and they all move in together. Working in the shop for money and competing in the tournament. As the story progresses more characters are introduced that help in the tournament and live with the main character...
So... What do you think so far?? opinions?? :D
If i anything is spelled wrong.. its late and im at work lol