S13 POEM!!!---Rough Draft

[xyoobxyoob]

gfdgfdgdfgdfgfgdf

[McRussellPants]

Damn Luddy.


This is Zilvia so I expect some pretty balls touching posts, but thats quite possibly the gayest thing ever.


Fuck. go read a book or something.

[CylonFrakker]

i thought it was good. He actually spent time doing something constructive intstead of being a douche bag

[staygold24]

seriously I have a a lover for cars and everything but thats gayer than aids.

maybe write about a girl. thats more widely accepted.

[ThatGuy]

Good on creativity.

Not as good on quality.


If that upsets anyone, don't post things on the internet that you can't handle being critiqued about.

[Helghast]

seriously I have a a lover for cars and everything but thats gayer than aids.

maybe write about a girl. thats more widely accepted.

Yes, Write about girls.
Then we can all post the chicks we'd tap.

It's like that hilarious-thread-that-got-locked-because-there-was-some-hot-underaged-chicks-not-that-I'm-into-that-kinda-stuff all over again.

[McRussellPants]

He must have accidentially deleted it, fortuneately for him I copy pasta'd it else where to rofl at.


here you go dude.

The Sunny day brightens the Tortous Path that lies ahead,
The S13 creeps onward as the path hugs its thread,
So the S13 launches, anxious to tackle the turns and bends,
The Redtop awakens as the gears ascend,
The Rockers rock the Cams, the cams work the Valves,
And so the Turbo Spools, the Front Mount Cools,
The Tires Screech, the rubber burns,
The Gears Descend, and so it turns,
The Tractions Gone, The Smoke Spawns,
The Chassis Slants, The SR Chants,
And so it Shifts, as it alters into a Drift,
Everything lets go, the S13 goes with the Flow,
A Drift is generated, and Harmony is Fabricated.

[Helghast]

AHAHAHAHAHAH
that's soooo fucked up.

He's gonna go commit e-suicide!
Can't handle the e-thuggery.


He must have accidentially deleted it, fortuneately for him I copy pasta'd it else where to rofl at.


here you go dude.

The Sunny day brightens the Tortous Path that lies ahead,
The S13 creeps onward as the path hugs its thread,
So the S13 launches, anxious to tackle the turns and bends,
The Redtop awakens as the gears ascend,
The Rockers rock the Cams, the cams work the Valves,
And so the Turbo Spools, the Front Mount Cools,
The Tires Screech, the rubber burns,
The Gears Descend, and so it turns,
The Tractions Gone, The Smoke Spawns,
The Chassis Slants, The SR Chants,
And so it Shifts, as it alters into a Drift,
Everything lets go, the S13 goes with the Flow,
A Drift is generated, and Harmony is Fabricated.

[C. Senor]

thats messed up guys..lol...he put some time and effort....so b+ for effort....b+

[ONYX S-13]

gfdgfdgdfgdfgfgdf


Uhhhh.. Did I miss something here?:ugh:

Nevermind.. I see the poem now.

[Helghast]

Hi, you must be stupid.

Thanks for playing.

[Irukandji]

It's really not bad... but it's one of those things I would never show anyone

[kdashy]

Sad.





ddddddddddd

[Walperstyle]

better than that rap about the 90 240sx

i have it on my server somewhere www.cooleeze.com/STREET.mp3

[Baka Sama]

The Sunny day brightens in xyoobxyoob head,
Seeing his S13 in the driveway he thinks time to create another gay thread,
So the noob launches, anxious to get +1 reps after his post mends,
The flamers awaken as the gay thread in OT ascends,
The Flamers flame away, and the haters... well they hate anyway,
And so the replies Spool, and xyoobxyoob's pride seems to Cool,
The flamers flame is hot, and xyoobxyoob's masculinity burns,
"This thread was suppose to be awesome", but now it slowly turns,
The loves Gone, Oh where did it go so wrong,
And so it Shifts, Jesus Christ I cant believe this fag made a poem about a Drift!!!,
So everyone lets go, And Baka Sama's thoughts began to Flow,
This is fucking Zilvia where noobies get owned!, Or didnt this Fucker know? :fawk2:

[EvilRB]

^^
Now that took effort


He must have accidentially deleted it, fortuneately for him I copy pasta'd it else where to rofl at.


here you go dude.

The Sunny day brightens the Tortous Path that lies ahead,
The S13 creeps onward as the path hugs its thread,
So the S13 launches, anxious to tackle the turns and bends,
The Redtop awakens as the gears ascend,
The Rockers rock the Cams, the cams work the Valves,
And so the Turbo Spools, the Front Mount Cools,
The Tires Screech, the rubber burns,
The Gears Descend, and so it turns,
The Tractions Gone, The Smoke Spawns,
The Chassis Slants, The SR Chants,
And so it Shifts, as it alters into a Drift,
Everything lets go, the S13 goes with the Flow,
A Drift is generated, and Harmony is Fabricated.




See thats what zilvia is all about helping each other out!!:keke:

A+ for effort but It's not something I would ever post for everyone to read But seriously good try!:)

[Baka Sama]

No effort. I was in the middle of writing my research paper so I thought I would do a little "creative writing".

[C. Senor]

HAHAHA now that poem was good...made me laugh.

[godzillarb]

I like xyoobxyoob's "revised" version 10000x better.

[AlligatorBling]

::smirks:: man... you are just asking for all hell to come down on you by putting something like that on zilvia. i feel for you.

[azndoc]

I read both poems and well the original's I give a B- for creativity and Baka's I give a A+ for giving it to him so raw. Awesome........

[theicecreamdan]

Tortoise path?

something's wrong with my car, the cams ain't cammin. I think my computer's got a virus.

http://fine-lines.artiverse.net/pics/signs/welder.jpg me
http://www.shopoutfitters.com/WebPhotos/TubeBending/2b_editedRS.jpg my tools
http://www.inkycircus.com/jargon/images/mountain.jpg my canvas
http://scihuman.org/Harmony.gif my finished result?

[Baka Sama]

Since when have you started being nice?? They must have made you a Mod or something. :rolleyes:

[Neejay]

Dan, you are a fucking FOOL. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

hahahahaha